| Reviews for Just a Kiss |
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dancingbarefoot 2/6/13 . chapter 1Your work is remarkable! |
Lady Dragona 3/21/12 . chapter 1What a great what if. I loved that Edward was the one that pointed out to Bella that Jake might be the right choice for her even though he would always love her. |
brankel1 4/1/11 . chapter 1Awesome. |
nipponophile 10/27/10 . chapter 1This is one of the best Jake and Bells stories I have ever, every read. Your Jake especially reads so true, so in character. I'm totally Team Jacob, so I love the happy J&B ending of this one. So sweet and romantic without unnecessary graphics. Hope you write more. |
Tanja83 9/25/10 . chapter 1Yes I very much enjoyed this. He sure had a very good dream huh...or so he thought. This was a reallly good one shot. |
TeamJacobYeah 9/6/10 . chapter 1How did I never see this before? It really made me smile. I think you hit Jacob and Bella's personalities and realationship spot-on! The confused and twisting way she thinks, Jacob being such a guy;thinking he was dreaming-SURE he did! It was so awesome. Made me hate the books ending even more than I already do! How I wish this was the way things had gone for Bella and Jacob. |
JakeNessie 9/2/10 . chapter 1LOL! I love this! Please continue with this story. |
LadyofSpain 8/30/10 . chapter 1I loved it. It was so in character. How pathetic, I'm head over heels in love with a fictional job. |
symmasters 8/28/10 . chapter 1I LOVE it! |
faint-of-hart 8/17/10 . chapter 1.AMAZING! I LOOOOOVVVVEEE IT! |
basaltone 7/23/10 . chapter 1 I really enjoyed Jake's interaction with Quil and Embry, his desperation was so realistic. He actually reacted like a 16 year old boy (unlike so many stories). Thanks. |
NUNICHAN 7/21/10 . chapter 1This was great! All three of them are in character and this is what I wish would have taken place in the books. Well something along those lines anyway. Your JPOV is really good; I felt like it was really him, no middle man or anything, telling what he was thinking. Great job! |
ColourMeChaos 7/21/10 . chapter 1I did, i like it very much. It was so sweet! Aww, it always makes me smile when i think of Jacob and Bella together. |
twilight 7/18/10 . chapter 1 i think u should have won. that storyd really gd. u should think of carrying on. |
Guest 7/14/10 . chapter 1 I've been reading your fanfic coz I like the way you put Jake's and Edward's character. What I value the most is that you try to keep them in character and I love the fact that she has to choose and you write the whole process of it. Keep on writing ) |