ive always wondered what these two thought about that.

this was actually good!

Wow! That was sad, but really well written.

-your devoted reader

Gooniegirl

I think this was good, they always seem to be left out in stories and they were lucky to have not boarded the ship. Great idea.

Great story!

Cooool! Nice one-shot with an interesting concept! I like how you connected the other two un-named men who Jack and Fabri shared a room with. Great writing and keep up the excellent work!

Jillianna