Please upload the rest of the story when you get the chance... It's such a compelling plot!

ahhhhh

my poor heart.

it's like it's being squeezed from the very beginning of the story

and now it'S going so fast

you write this so well. It's like I'm there, staring at everything...

It's so wonderful, it breaks my heart

you are such a wonderfull writer. I love your plot ideas and the way you write it.

wow great story off to read the next :)

Aizen is such an ass :(

but your story is soooo amazing...actually all of them are :)

And it's finished. I ave to say, I really enjoyed this (even though you killed Aizen) What I really enjoyed was the fact that Byakuya wasn't a whiny little girl as he is portrayed in most stories, at least his vulnerability is well deserved after what that bastard did to him (though Bya totally enjoyed, but shh, don't tell any one).

"...she was beginning to have shinigami powers" this sentence is bugging me, it would be more grammatically correct to say something along the lines of "...she was beginning to gain her shinigami powers"

You killed Aizen. You're mean :(((

Oh dear.

Haha, Aizen got pwn'd.

Wow, that's heavy.

Unohana's bad-ass.

Aizen has every right to be furious, how dard Renji touch Bya like that? Go take back what's yours, my boy.

"Elementary, my dear strawberry." LOL

I see through you,

dude-who-looks-like-Byakuya.

Also, I think I might just hate you right now. You just had to plant that urahara/ichigo seed into my brain, didn't you?

Pff, Byakuya really needs to learn his place XD

There's something really appealing about a vulnerable and unnerved Bya, and Aizen does such a good job at making him feel that way. I kind of wish Renji would go away and let him capture Byakushi again.

Dum dum duummm. Sorry, couldn't resist.

Ha! I knew Hiromi was bad news! Also, Aizen isn't dead happy dance