At the end of this chapter you say that this story is over but you haven't got it marked as complete you may want to change that to gain more readers; it was only luck that I stumbled upon this (I rarely, if ever, read incomplete stories). Just thought I'd mention it to you so that you can get the audience that you deserve.

Storywise-I loved this so much; it was such a great and fun read. I do plan on reading the sequel (though I don't know if I'll get to it tonight) but don't get offended if I don't review on it. I have a terrible habit of not reviewing (or leaving on small reviews on great stories); I really just left one here so that you might consider changing the status of this story. It doesn't mean I don't/didn't enjoy your work (and I'll definitely make recommends to my friends who also read here). Keep up the great work!

whats the sequal?

ahh they were so kawaii! i loved it! harry adn sev wer awsome especialy in quidditch!

I sent the review for chapter 13 before I'd finished writing it, ooppss! Anyway, I think Severus and Harry both learned something through the experience of being 3yrs together, if you ignored them being captured and taken to MoldyShorts briefly! They both learned some of there preconceptions of each other were wrong and they learned to get on together through the experience. I don't think Severus (or even Harry) realised what was missing from their lives until this experience...they may have found a friend in each other (or perhaps more?)...someone who could truly understand them.

Utterely brilliant story! I think that both Severus and Harry found the experience rewarding at times and embrassing at others.

when will you come out with lurid?

It was neat & also funny in some places

Is this story going to be completed soon?:P

hey hey hey that was awsome...funny...cute...and down right wierd..lol...but it was awsome and i cant wait to read the sequel..see yha-

When I think about it, wasn't 'Little bunny Foo-Foo' a bunny who run around in the forest and smashed mices in the head with a hammer? I recal reading that somewhere... Maby in Leonore, I think. And it's a child-rime too...

Hey! Howw can Potter posibly be cuter than Severus? A child Severus with his normal attitude... It's just... Kawai...

Okey. it was good. I hope you write more.

Very Very GOOd

I can't wait to read your sequel "giggles" harry and snape are so cute together hehehehehehee...harry*slythrinson

Please. Please... UPDATE!
SOON!