Since reading you fan fic, i think i might have become a little obsessive of the story you have woven. I have read that are through with the labyrinth story. I really must insist that you finish this story or at least suggest someone who has. I am an avid reader of fairytale romance(not the mushy stuff, but the kind where it doesnt come easy). I ash furious though, becuase you cant leave a story without an ending; happy, sad, or other wise. In this story did they get married,what happen to his lost kingdom, what happen to the elves; just so many things left untold. Please make time to as least tell the ending. My suggestion for ideas is try reading wicked, or son of a witch, or twilight.

I know it has been a long time since you have updated, but I thought one more impassioned plea couldn't hurt...please please PLEASE consider finishing! I am enamoured by your stories and you have such a good one going here. I'm truly saddened that I may never know what happens.

SO CRUEL...
...:(...
I'M JUST EXCITED,PLEASSE FINISH SOON:)

WHAT'S NEXT?

THE WORST HAS YET TO COME. OUCH...

ALAS..TRUE LOVE! WHAT I WOULDN'T GIVE.AT LEAST THEY HAVE ANOTHER ONE ON THEIR SIDE?

GOODS AND BADS.TIMES TICKING.PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY.

I HOPE JARETH AND SARAH ARE READY FOR THIS. I'M NOT. !GULP!

THEY CAN'T BE SEPARATED!GREAT WAY FOR THE STORY START.:( BUT I TRUST THAT THINGS WILL GET BETTER.^_-.


IT REALLY DOES SOUND GOOD SO FAR,NOTHING WRONG W/ A LITTLE ACTION.

Ooh! Please continue, PLEASE!

Wow, this is such an incredible story! Yay for Sarah and Jareth! I really hope that you'll continue this at some point. This is such an awesome fic to just leave unfinished.

Ohh you dont write short stories do you? I love your stories so far I have read Waking Dreams, Calming Storm, Vendetta, and The Debt and I have loved each and every one of them. The characters Sarah and Jareth have so much depth and personality that goes far far beyond what the movie even hinted at. (I never read the book) Got to your stories by accedent and don't figure I'll stop till I have read them all. May take a while though, work is such a buzzkill. I will try to review on the other stories I read but I'm really bad about doing so. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know there is one more person out there soaking up your stories and enjoying your creativity. Can't wait to read all of yout others.
Allie Tanner

oh i love this story im a huge fan of the debt and im a huge fan of this i love love love it was else is there to say but i just wish you would contiune the story

Ooh, LOVEE IT! oh, please write more! I am suffering everyday!! PUH-LEEASE!! Anyways, I really like this story... so far. The traditions from the underground being compared from our aboveground traditions/rules. You really made a world out of this story(well, then again, every labyrinth author does) but, I love how you explained how to gain immortality, and you kept reminding me that david bowie does in fact have an accent. which in most stories, they just say, "deep, accented voice"-wait, that's the same thing-oh, well. I COMMAND THEE WORTHY WRITER, THOUST SHALL FINSIH WHAT THOU HATH STARTED. *hoot, hoot!*

OMG! You have to update. Your stories turned me to Labyrinth fanfics. I can't wait to read more.