Short, sweet and to the point. ;)

excellent history!love it!

I am charmed with the lemon!

That edward did mistake! Thankfully could arrange it ... )

maru..

GAH. Perfection. *sigh* I was rec'd this by ordinary_vamp on Twitter last night. I really, really enjoyed it. Very well-written & a nice little plot twist to boot.

Thanx for sharing!

jada

WHOA! Why the HELL did Alice marry Jacob? That was odd... I liked it but it was odd.

xoxo Rozie

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I loved and men can be so stupid

Love cocky asshole Edward making up for saying mean things. So much fun making up can be! ;-)

Great one-shot! Drama & Sex hot! Thanks for sharing your story with us.

seriously hot...:)

You certainly do like the odd pairing don't you? You had me a bit confused with the "J".

Love love love that Edward was that worried about Alice that he made a scene at her wedding.

wooow! quite drama here hahaha.. i love drama :D

great o/s has left me wanting to know more

Great one shot overall, but there's just one thing I'd like to ,well, complain about I guess you could say: WHY DID ALICE END UP WITH JACOB? POOR JASPER! DUMB JASPER! YOU WAIT UNTIL SHE'S OUT OF THE RELATIONSHIP! BE HER FRIEND!

Ok, enough with the over the top caps. I've had my rant.

But I do like how much of an idiot Edward is. For all the times I minimised the screen when he embarrassed himself (which was often) I really like his character.

So, besides the mutt situation, very good.

Oh, wow...this little one-shot causes my emotions to be all over the place! I so desperately want to be pissed at Edward for being such a dick, but the truth is that he felt it justified since he was honestly confused by the situation. He shouldn't have said that to Bella no matter how pissed he was, but I know he learned his lesson by making a disaster of everthing the way he did.

They're so attracted to each other, that it was bound to explode into such a heated passion. You did it justice, girl. Damn good justice. Great job, bb!

amazing!