Wow. That one had me guessing the entire time. I didn't know if it was Bruce or Dick who was hurt. But I really like the way this turned out. It fits with the characters.

Talk about a "best" gift, taking out Two-Face and his men. If Dick had died, it would have been the worst Father's Day for Bruce. Then again, Bruce probably doesn't even think about Father's day. I guess he will now.

Aww. I like it. Especially the ending lines.

Outstanding! The thoughts mixed with with the dialogue (I loved guessing who was saying what!) were mixed up at first but it all came together for the big reveal at the end.

AW! Sweet, but not corny.

Only a Bat"child" would give Their dad the gift of heart Fauilure for father's day :} Bruce "next PLease Buy me a tie ,som'

ahhh the ending made me squeal! wonderful story! thank you!

Hehe, this was cute 3

Again, your tone for Dick is so believable, I loved every word.

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AWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SO CUTE!

cute ending

Typical Bruce. Just forgetting Father's Day like that, I point out with a grin.

There were so many ways you could have taken this sotry, some good and some bad, and I half expected a story between Dick and Damian but you delivered nicely as usual. You know, I really do need to get to reading The Power of Three. . .

Just brilliant. This was absolutely wonderful. So well done. The scene is well set (the little medical jargon is spot on) and Dick's POV is perfect for coming out of sedation.

Lovely and sentimental, a favorite.

LJ

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