She might at that, maybe that's the reason they seem to all have vanished by Legend of Korra.

-Dyslexic Nerd

I so preferred this chapter to the first.

This is too cute both toph and zuko are in character I always like this pairing their personalities will be dynamic togther, and there is a lot of similarites between the two character good story

this deserves more than 13 reviews this is so well written!

WHOO!

XD

I really enjoyed reading this story, thanks.

Hmmmm...It was...AWESOME! Most toko fanfics are so immature or fluffy, it's unbelievable! But this, it was just right!

Completely awesome .. I loved Zuko's point of view so much because at the end he's still a teen being 'ambushed' by Toph ... I love her.

Oooh, Continue? :D

Salma

I love the story! Especially the Zuko's POV... well captured teen boy feelings. I'd love to see more!

Ha, Zuko's deathly pallor. Great story, I loved it sooo much! Keep writing!

huh, interesting. This is actually my first read for this fandom. I liked it. I did notice a spelling error in the second chapter, however. you have chocked instead of choked. Other than that slight inperfection, it was good. I liked the concept.

Heh, very entertaining. Nice work on this.

Well written.

I could imagine Toph doing something outrageous like that and Zuko cursing while he saves her.

haha!