ugh okay in this chapter Sarah pissed me off. when she lashed out at Jareth about living in the underground, i thought it was completely selfish.

i mean she knows he has to run a kingdom. he's king of the goblins! what is he supposed to do? abandon his people to stay with her in her world?

and then to insult him like that after he's done all those things for her, psh what an ungrateful person.

ugh!

lol rant over, back to reading:p

"He's weird Sarah, with his strange clothes and his 80's harido, and he wears make up around his eyes for god sakes!"

that part made me lol XD

i love this story so far!

A wonderful story that was well written!

The plot seemed to drag in some places, but considering how long this story was, it didn't drag for too long. I really liked Aryanna and how this whole thing came out of a one-shot. Your characterization of Jareth and Sarah were pretty good too. I loved all the time they spent together and that Jareth and Hoggle were able to get along... somewhat. lol

Great story!

I LOVED this story! can't wait to read others!

I don't know if you are still out there somewhere, but I wanted you to know I really enjoyed this fic! So, thanks for sharing it and also for leaving it posted all this time! It was very good! -Clare

*throws confetti*

That was awesome!

My imaginary Edward agrees. X3

HAY GUISE LET'S MAKE FUN OF THE FAT GIRL LOL

Insecure much? It's much more effective to make a character cruel and beautiful-all the more harder to see the deception, and all the more gratifying their downfall. Stop pushing stereotypes.

that was prety awesome

lovely!

This story was absolutely AWESOME! I laughed, cried, got angrey and confused all in one story. In other words you kicked some major butt with this story.

Thanks and hope to read mroe form you again.

Really enjoyed your story.

I love it!

M

sequel,my lovely author sequel infinity prequel and all, kisses

Awesome story, I really enjoyed it. Especially the Jareth clone give-away. What better way to get people to come and read your story? lol. Can't wait to read the sequel!

Excellent story...I don't know what else to say. It was great.