Hehe...I can't wait to find out how she reacts to that particular statement. Between that and Ary's anger at Jareth for 'losing' Sarah, you've set a marvelous start for a huge conflict. Good Job! *Gold Star* :) I'm really anxious to see the next chapter. Bravo and namarie!

She feels sick already? Do his babies mature faster than human ones? B/c she hasn't been pregnant for very long, correct? Like a week or something, at max...anyhows, very nicely done, though, can't wait for chapter 36, woohoo!

Great story! I've been spending my online time for the past 3 days to read everything and catch up with everyone. I didn't want to read this story at first, thinking it would be boring like all the rest I've read have been, but I'm glad I did now! Beautiful work! PLEASE keep the good work up and keep posting as frequently as you have been!

-"Striving for excellence motivates you; striving for perfection is demoralizing."

This story just keeps getting better and better every chapter. I am eagerly awaiting the next one.

Hey, loved the story. I can't wait until chapter 36 comes out. Keep up the good writing. Oh, and I know this is really late, but if you have Jareth clone left, may please have it? -ducks head- I know, I'm late. Wishful thinking. But, I loved the story all the same. Very original.

-Stephy

ooooooh, and the bomb drops.. *grins* Good move on Hoggle's part, I figured he hadn't just run off and abandoned Jareth. Glad they rescued Sarah, too, but I have a feeling it's not over yet.. never is. Anyway. Eeek! Bell rang! Gotta go! *snugs and poofs*

Great chapter. I am glad Hoggle didn't run away and that they are together now. I can't wait to see what Sarah's reaction is to what Jareth just told her. :)

NO! You can't stop there! I want to know what she's going to say! Are they going to get out all right! How is Sarah going to react to this news! I have to know! AHHHH! I don't like cliffhangers! More soon! Please! I have to know! But this was a great chapter, but I just have to know what happens next! Please write more soon!

Oh my. I hope everything turns out all right. keep up the good work.

OK.. I'm just about caught up now - and am still having a hectic life - as you have probably gathered from the half finished email I sent you, and the fact that I haven't had chance to send another since.. Anyhow - I must commend you for this story - you are certainly keeping us all on our toes - I couldn't possibly have foreseen any of the events over the past few chapters. I love how you've got hoggle involved and hinted at a past which explains how he was able to travel through the labyrinth and these dungeons so easily - and you've characterised him so very well, he really is excellent!. The monster and Gorgin's treatment of Jareth were suitably shocking - stripped of his powers Jareth is truly vulnerable in this place, that's a nice little plot device..;) I am looking forward _so_ much to reading Sarah's reaction to the little bombshell that Jareth has just dropped on her too - Oh keep up the great work - and I will do my utmost to review more often - time restraints permitting...;) Hope you are well - speak soon, Helen..

Wow!

*bites nails nervously* Eeeek! Someone save Jareth! ;o; *cries*

Oro, I really hope Ary didn't mean what she said... you can't end the story that way, Sarah will go back to being miserable again. *pout* Anyway, great chapter, had me all anxious at the end, and angst is good and happy and stuff. n.n Write more and such!

Wow. this is so great. Please let Jareth save her.

ooh this is fun! Glad you're back, etc, etc, and kicking bottom. Love the evil cliffhanger ...

Uh-oh...I just realized I have a problem...I read too fast for my own good! I know, I know, I have to wait with everyone else to see more, but...arghh...I haven't even seen the movie, and I'm hooked beyond belief .