Nice job. Gives a very different point to our favorite GK.

I tried to review this last night - but my computer was acting up - for some reason I couldn't sign in to the review screen? go figure - Anyhow - I love this. 'Hours' is such a great album, the master bard at his finest - I really believe he's done some of his best work in the last ten years. I actually stopped buying Bowie albums after 'Never Let Me Down' - what an ironic title .. So I only discovered all the great stuff he's done since about three years ago, and could have kicked myself for giving up on him..

Anyhow - I could ramble on about DB all day.. This was originally meant to be about your story. Oh poor Jareth, to discover such an alien emotion as love and not understand or know how to deal with it... This was so poignantly beautiful. And what an appropriate song..'You're the great mistake I never made' - too true..;)

Beautiful concept. Brought things to light that I would have never thought of. I feel so bad for Jareth! He needs comforting.

great story, im in love with that song- i never thought how it could fit well ith the labyrinth, but it works so well! kutos to you!

...oh...very sad. Very nicely written though. kmf