| Reviews for Just Another Day |
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smelsies 6/26/10 . chapter 1That was so awesome. |
LadyAllure Allurechan 6/26/10 . chapter 1SWEET! I can never get enough of Jasper..._ I can't wait to read more! |
3wolfz 6/26/10 . chapter 1I can't wait until they tell Edward! |
SassenachWench 6/25/10 . chapter 1Nice job! Thanks so much for updating. |
gemin 6/25/10 . chapter 1Good God that was sexy. That shower scene. Lord! I cannot express fully how in love with this story as a whole I am. It still haunts me ALL THE TIME. I'll get flashes of Jasper and Bella splashing about in the rain, them walking into the hotel her shirt all wet and see through and Jasper feeling the emotions of the men in the room and getting territorial, the club scene when he watches her dancing, and later that night when they attack each other for the first time! Still probably the sexiest scene EVER for me. That whole night. But yeah. I remember this story so vividly it's like I read it yesterday. Which says a lot for me, but if something is even the slightest bit forgetful, I'm going to forget it. And I remember details here too, like Jasper being ready to go with the condom in his pocket when they're lounging in the chair by the lake. And Bella calling him out on it. Anyway, I could go on. I'm hoping beyond all hope that there is more where this comes from. You've opened up all avenues of possibility for there to be more, I'm hoping there is. Lots. Multiplied by even more lots. Also. Shower scene much? You are a goddess. I've got to get my hands on all those book series on your profile page. If that's what you read, I need to be reading it too. |
NatalieLynn 6/25/10 . chapter 1I'm so glad you did this add-on, even if poor Bella is a bit of a basket case. :) I really enjoyed it, and it complements your original story wonderfully. |
VampireCat3 6/25/10 . chapter 1This story is so [insert every good adjective in the english language here] |
shellebean 6/25/10 . chapter 1Bravo! I was so happy to see you in my inbox! You turned me to Jasper and Bella stories so I was happy to see something from you again! There's no going back now, lol! Thanks for making my day! |
Ladybug75 6/25/10 . chapter 1Thank you, thank you, thank you. I just finished re-reading When Darkness Turns to Light when I go an email notifying me of this posting. It was perfect, and fit perfectly. I hope you write more stories... |
WhitlockWoman 6/25/10 . chapter 1Oh my! I'm doing a happy dance all over. I was so excited when I saw this in my inbox. I love this Jasper and Bella and getting any glimpse into their story is a major win in my book. That being said...daaamn it's hot in here. I'm thinking I need a shower and as I have no bench or sexy Jasper waiting for me, I'm guessing it'll have to be a cold one ;). The lemons in this were yummy. Well done. It was nice to read a story were Bella wasn't the most controled newborn ever and/or the ultimate vampire of all time. It seems stories with one or both of those themes have been really prevalent lately and I for one I'm not a huge fan. The way her year was explained was believable and seemed real. As real as things can be in a made up world. Kudos. Maybe I'm a newborn vampire too because I could totally relate to Bella's conflicting, overwhelming emotions. lol Seriously though, especially on the Alice front I can understand her point of view. There are so many issues with that situation. It's not cut and dried at all. I would feel awkward, reluctant and resentful at the very least. I don't think Alice is helping her cause by being pushy either. I've always felt, even in the books, that Alice's pushiness and control issues would get real old, real quick. Maybe one day they'll be friends again, but it's quite obvious that time isn't now. I really like that Bella hasn't embraced the Cullens with wide open arms at this point. I've always felt that she was so needy and insecure in the books that she welcomed them back in her life like they were doing her a favor coming back. They may have apologized but I felt they were let off the hook way to easily. That never sat well with me...but maybe I'm just mean and unforgiving. :) Anyway, I didn't mean for this to get so long. I am just so geeked that you wrote this and seriously, it's like it was tailored to my way of thinking. If I didn't know better I'd swear I was reading one of those 'you decide the outcome' books. You truly have created an amazing world here and I can only hope that this isn't the last that we hear from our beloved couple. But if it is, well, I can't complain because this was awesome. Great job. |
twimama77 6/25/10 . chapter 1cool |
LoveStoryFan 6/25/10 . chapter 1That was amazing. I really hope that you continue this story. You are the reason I changed to reading mostly Jasper and Bella Fics. Your portrayal of him was amazing. |
drkvctry 6/25/10 . chapter 1So excited to see this ! Can't tell you how happy I am that you are back! |
Jasper's Darlin' Kathy 6/25/10 . chapter 1I enjoyed reading this and I look forward to reading more. Kathy |
Princess Mishawaka 6/25/10 . chapter 1I have been waiting so long for you to write again. I fell in love with your first story and although I have read many more the first one is always the very best. I like that you are beginning this story right after the first one ended. I can relate to all the characters and what they have been through. Especially, Bella of course. I like reading fics on this site but if you ever want to post on another site for any reason I am librarian on Rogue fanfic and we would love to see you post your stories there. Post soon. Joan |