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EvilFuzzy9 4/16/12 . chapter 9
Haha, man, I really like this fic, but it's hard to think of anything to say in reviews besides that.

Sooo: "I really like this fic."

:P

TTFN
EvilFuzzy9 4/16/12 . chapter 2
I love how Tenten stumbled over the word 'transfiguration'. I don't know why, but it simply brought a smile to my face.
jasmineflowr19876 3/29/12 . chapter 9
Please update soon!
Shadi Shada 3/17/12 . chapter 9
Hi quick review here, yeah. So I'll be following this story now and I owe u some reviews. Love the funny omake. Story good. I came to this story after reading your one-shot with Draco. Thank you for the details that make the story have sense. Like location, previous knowledge of Konoha and relation to the world. I will wait for more of what is to come. Thank you for your hard work and writing this story and others. Huh not short but not so time consuming, the review. Well take care, good health to you and best of luck. Oh and If I may be so bold as to suggest some good reading on Naruto and HP crossovers. There is one inparticular that I enjoy and is on-going called Telos by Abstracted. Enjoy.
DemonKittyAngel 2/25/12 . chapter 9
Honestly, TenTen, not a character I seek out but I do love when she's written well. A lot of people take so many liberties adn turn her into a Mary-Sue because her character isn't that well explored in Cannon. I see this as the real TenTen. Honestly, don't have a pairing and if anything, I always think that she and Neji work well together.

Just a thought: When she said to Cedric that she had killed people, wouldn't he assume that she had translated it funny and was giving him a hypothetical? It's much more reasonable than him just accepting that she's killed people. It also makes more sense culturally.

Also, when she's speaking japanese, some of the wording just sounds off. Is English your second language?
Wolfsbane-Nin 1/27/12 . chapter 9
Heh. _ This fic is awesome! I really like the plot This fic is slowly becoming more and more interesting! I love how things are progressing so far

Magic Magic The world is full of it! X3 - I'd really appraciate it if you updated this (preferrrably soon...) I'd love to know what happens next

Ja ne!
xXWWXx 1/13/12 . chapter 9
It's funny because I was thinking that someone would have to be Sasuke. I always remember this story way later after you update but I hope you update soon because I smell plot.
SaturnXK 12/21/11 . chapter 9
A nice, different kind of story. I like it ;D
lalala 12/15/11 . chapter 8
'Konbawa' is actually Japanese for good night, but other than that, this story is wonderful.
Kjrs 11/22/11 . chapter 9
Oh boy... Now not only does Tenten have to deal with the bratty students in Hogwarts two of the students know about her being a kunoichi and one of their parents want to meet her.

Why in the world does Shoma's mother wants to meet Tenten in the first place anyway? Did Shoma tell her about Tenten? Does that mean that Tenten will have to find a way to make Shoma keep his mouth shut, /permanently/?

By the way, canonically the place that Naruto and the others live in isn't really called the Elemental Countries, because how are you going to explain places like the Lands of Tea and Noodles with that name? It's officially called "ninkai", meaning the World of Ninja.
Androgynous-Heron 11/21/11 . chapter 8
At least you are being original on the people who find out about Ten-Ten mission progress...
Blinded in a bolthole 11/18/11 . chapter 8
Good to see you avoided stereotypicalization, as in Pure Evil Slytherins (really? 11 years old evil kids...), Hermione's sisters in creed Ravenclaws and... Though meeting with the so called golden trio (a title I really don't like.) in the train-ride was kind of random.
Blinded in a bolthole 11/18/11 . chapter 6
On the subject of language, I actually like it very much (even though sometimes it annoys me, english being my third language I struggle with it as it is). I really don't think there is a translation spell/charm but rather faster methods of learning languages (why and how else knew 20 (or 200) different languages?) and am absolutely sure there is no translation jutsu (not counting mind-reading jutsus and the like). I have seen only one other story (Stick Figures) that actually considered this and do appreciate its novelty.

Just one thing, why did you use the exact same list as Triwizards first task dragons for wand core?

As for the pairings... really? It's just a one year mission for a kunoichi that Tsunade as her a rule model AND she is 15 while Harry's yearmates are 14, while a mild and rather platonic pairing might happen for the Yule, anything serious? AND almost all students are too soft and psychologically unfit to make a lasting relationship with someone who puts her life on the line in an almost daily basis and killed more than once before age 14.

Sure Harry Potter himself fought and killed his share but self-defense is different from paid-job.

So I request of you to focus on clash of cultures and their interactions rather than near-impossible pairings.

Wish you luck. Blinded!
Lunatic Pandora1 11/16/11 . chapter 9
For some reason I'd like to see Tenten surf a broom... that'd be cool.
gardensigernumbli 11/15/11 . chapter 9
oh man, I totally forgot I got a prize! I'm so sorry for keeping you waiting. orz heh, I'm a nejiten fan - maybe a letter from home? Or a little more, either way's fine with me. XD

I love the Asians-in-Hogwarts dynamic you've got going on here. (Not just because I'm Chinese) It's always nice to have some racial similarities when on the other side of the planet... Shoma and Uchi are adorable, by the way, can't wait to see more of them!
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