|Reviews for Missing|
| White Stereotype 7/23/10 . chapter 4
I loved this chapter too :D
Sakora being Kakashi's ex was an interesting twist I did not see coming. And Deidara appeared, yay!
I also am looking forward to the fic-pics
| dp138504 7/22/10 . chapter 4
It was short but well written. The part about Kakashi and his Icha-Icha books made me laugh. I've never gotten the whole point of saying member instead of...well you know. Oh, and at the end which lips were you referring to? Can't wait for more!
| White Stereotype 7/7/10 . chapter 3
I think this chapter was my favorite actually :D. Bitch to write or not, it turned out pretty well.
Dawwww, Sakora and Sarika's playful bantering makes me miss our's D:
Mmmm, I'm not sure why, but when Sakura said "Yes, Pig?" I started cracking up X)
| dp138504 7/7/10 . chapter 3
I liked it. Yeah, it was filler but it was still enjoyable. Still waiting for an EPIC FIGHT SCENE, and I couldn't find the reference anywhere.
| Nohbdy 6/28/10 . chapter 2
Hooray for plot development! It was really good, I especially enjoyed the first paragraph...I don't know why but I just liked the way it read.
| White Stereotype 6/27/10 . chapter 2
Another great chapter!
You know, I can't really remember how the old story end, or what really happened in it, save for a few things. Which is good, because now each chapter is a surprise. Lol :D
Looking foward to the rest
| White Stereotype 6/26/10 . chapter 1
YES, you should bother! :D
I really like it so far. I can't remember how the old version started, but I think this one is much better. Your writing style has really improved chika :). And the first two paragraphs were quite a hook.
(And yay, I'm in it!)
So yeah, I look foward to the rest.
| dp138504 6/25/10 . chapter 1
From what I vaguely remember from Naruto I enjoyed it. The story was interesting and you used large words which is always a plus (compared to the people who use a first grader's vocab and grammar). I think you should continue.