This was a funny story and I enjoyed reading it. I can see both sides having validity, but I gotta wonder if all ninja remedial ('cause that's what this kinda was, as advanced as the skills were, for SE they were remedial) training is this humorous to those watching. Keep up the great work. Until next time.

Awesome last chapter. Are you going to continue the 'Storm Shadow going to collect Billy' in another story? If so, I'm looking forward to it.

I love the greenshirts' reactions to realizing that Storm Shadow had used them. I also loved how Beach Head tried his hardest not to crack up when he was reading the letters. Poor poor Hawk as well. It really is like he's in charge of a 'brat pack' sometimes instead of an elite military unit.

Heehee! Finally SnakeEyes blocks! I love the image of Hawk with all the joes and greenies in his office like the principal of a middle school. Storm always seems to have some sort of explanation for everything. Poor kitchen crew.

I think this was my favorite chapter yet. Storm Shadow's going to be a dead ninja if Snake Eyes finds out about the letters. The honey prank was awesome. I've got to give the greenshirts credit...it takes skill and lots of planning to pull something like that off!

I had a feeling that Stormy was behind the letter(s). And now honey is going to be involved. This story just keeps getting better and better. Thanks so much for writing it. I've got a cold at the moment and this story is cheering me up.

Another awesome chapter. Not only did the tranq gun make an appearance, but there was a reference to Ghost Beach Head. Poor Snakes is in a bad position. I can't wait to see what he does about all of this.

Oh Lord, it's just going to get worse from here on out, isn't it? The ninja are going to be either A. running from Hawk and/or B. laughing their asses off at the greenshirts.

Looks interesting so far. Got to love Storm Shadow's mouth. I do have to wonder how long the three of them can hide Timber.

I have been laughing very hard throughout this story so far. Hilarious only begins to describe it. Enjoying the attempted "cures" and seriously thinking Tommy is "The Victim", well, either him or the ghost that haunts the PT course. But I just think that would be hysterical to find out, but I look forward to what you have planned. Until next time.

I'm torn between being utterly distracted by the images of a buff, mostly naked, honey-coated ninja and laughing my brains out with Tommy. And it's true; if Tommy ever tried one of those holyshit luxury showers, he'd have them installed in every one of his hideouts and throughout the Arashikage home inside of a week. Things are freakin' GREAT.

Also, I maintain that your story about Tommy's father is mind-bendingly insano awesome.

Also, this chapter raises an existential riddle...if the psychiatrist himself is mentally traumatized, who does HE talk to?

*ROFL* hilarious.

Especially the part where Snake has to fend off an eager wolf from licking him clean by playing tag.

Poor Tommy, he sides really must have been aching after that day. I can really understand that he couldn't help laughing, I did exactly the same.

Cool idea with Tommy seeing Snakes scarred face for the first time. Especially considering that all ninja are in fact crazy it fits perfectly.

Great story, I'm eagerly waiting for the (unfortunately) last chapter.

Bwahahahahahahahhah! omg, Honey soaked, naked Ninja! I love it! Snake Eyes, For all that he's been through is a pretty calm and level headed guy. lol.

Great work.

poor snake

lol

timber tag!

lol

hurry update!

You are cruel. Hilariously, wonderfully, oh-god-I-think-I-sprained-something-laughing cruel.

It's rare that we get a chance to see Snake-Eyes lose his dignity. And it's not done gratuitously, either; rather, this whole thing is a marvelously cascading series of disasters that can only convince the ninjas that karma is finally coming after them for killing approximately half the world's population. The idea that the base thinks Snake got covered in honey as a result of . . . er, something to do with Scarlett . . . only makes the mayhem all the sweeter.

There is nothing about this story that I don't love. Thank you so much, and I can't wait for the finale!

Ahhh it's worth the wait! I love the descriptions of the situatons, they describe exactly what's going on without being wordy.

Love the greenies just doing their darnedest to cure their hero. Love love Storm doing his best to not laugh and failing miserably, and especially love Psyche-out's reaction.

Sad to hear it's almost done.