Very clever! I liked how you kept us guessing till the end - and even funnier to read again and realize what Willow is _actually_ talking about! Great dialogue - flows nicely. Keep writing!

Very funny. I like it.

LMAO You know I just had this feeling as I was reading it that Buff and Will weren't quite on the same page. Nicely done, had me laughing out of my computer chair!

*laughs* that was just too much..at first i thought willow thought buffy had a drinking problem, lol

brill - very funny.

had me going - thought it was spike, read about the cigs near the end, i KNEW it was spike and then its...just a smoking addiction. brill!

*laughs* That was great! It's insanely hard writing an all diaogue story that works, but you've done it with this piece quite well! I knew there was something more than going on when Willow brought up the subjects of "substitutes" _; Truly good work :)

Hehe...I think I love you.

it was good. but i didnt really think it was as funny as the other reviews thought sorry

jess

HahahahaHA! Oh God this is brilliant! Good job! I laughed SO hard at this...loved the point...I really didn't have an idea either!