 traycon3 2002-04-02 . chapter 11 like your story, but don't understand the sewaside part BUT THAT'S OK. write more please!!!! |
 Lydia 2002-03-27 . chapter 11Good epilogue, but the end (ch. 10) sorta stunk. Great idea, but it was to rushed. The whole fic could have used a couple plot twists, maybe gotten us to know moreabout Mirage and the AU animorphs. Not that you did a bad job, but it could have been better. This fic has potential for something bigger. |
 Nogard 2002-03-26 . chapter 10Good ending. |
 Nogard 2002-03-21 . chapter 9Pretty good so far. |
 Lydia 2002-03-08 . chapter 8Not a bad chapter, but you could use a Beta Reader. Keep writing, but try to make the chapters a little longer. |
 KittyKMae 2002-03-08 . chapter 5*shrugs* Your spelling and grammar are horrible, but if you proofread it (and did some revision in some places...), you would have a fairly good story. |
 Super Secret Mario 2002-03-08 . chapter 8Great chapter! :) |
 Lydia 2002-03-06 . chapter 7Ooooh, nice....Okie, write and upload, NOW. |
 Super Secret Mario 2002-03-06 . chapter 7Good chapter, can't wait for the next one! |
 Fei1 2002-03-06 . chapter 7Guess what? Yours is the first Animorphs story I've read here! I actually meant to for quite some time, but I was sort of too Anime'd out to remember...
anyway, post again soon! |
 p6 2002-03-06 . chapter 7Not many more chapters left??? Ah!! Post the next chapter soon!!! And I hope that there are more chapters than I'm starting to think there are!... Did that make any sence at all??? Doesn't matter... Great Fic!!
Phoenix |
 Lydia 2002-03-04 . chapter 6Too short to say much. Not bad though. |
 Lydia 2002-03-01 . chapter 5New Animorphs...okay, one word: BEWARE. Make the story believable, and no matter what, KILL THE MARY SUES. Also, no Animorph clones either (I.E. leader, joker, violent-prone, animal-lover, etc). It's okay to have a couple, but no clone please. Not a bad chapter though. Just beware. |
 Echoes of the Mind 2002-02-28 . chapter 5That was good. Can't wait till the next chapter. |
 p6 2002-02-28 . chapter 5Great Fic!!! Very Interesting!!! Post the next chapter soon!!! I cant wait to see what happens next!!!!! ^.^
Phoenix |