YAYYY EXTRA GOODIES THANK YOU!

*puts down boot* good chapter. *sigh* will her arms ever look good again? I hate when that happens to good people. How will the lobe react to this? Hmmm. Keep up the awsomeness

Good story, can't wait to see what she did to give Cave Guy the willies though.

Hmm... *Glances at bloody chainsaw in corner* Do I or don't I? *Shrugs* I guess I can let both you and Steff live. ...For now. Just kidding! But seriously, that's really sad. You did a good job writing the scene, but it was sad. I smiled at the mention of Alice in Wonderland. I hope Steff gets what she deserves... Freakazoid's totally going to kick himself for what happened, isn't he? Poor Onyx, hang in there! *glances back at corner* Uh-oh... You might want to be on the look out. Charlotte stole my chainsaw and she has a crazed and angry look on her face. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Me: Faye really, REALLY wants to mutilate Steff in the worst way possible right now...

Faye: Freak had BETTER find out that it was her fault in the next chapter! But other than that... YAY! BROWNIES AND PIE! I hope it's chocolate pudding pie!

This was really good, Nat. I applaud you.

Oh, BTW... *reads your disclaimer* WHAT! The MASK made a cameo and I NEVER NOTICED IT! O_o

*cries with great pain and floods the room* Nuuuuuuu! I hate you steff! Onyx didn't deserve any of that! I hope that something actually GOOD happens at prom... TT

Beatlesjuice

You don't need to change the rating. You tell people in the authors not that this chapter is going to be R rated. So then you don't have to change the actual rating. That's what I do. I love this story. Keep this up. I'll be sad when it ends.

Mama likes... Wait, when did I start saying that? I'm still waiting until she finds out about Freak and Dex at some point though. Don't worry I'm patient. I waited three months for an update on an epic story one and still waiting for the next no matter how suspenseful it is. I think I just distract myself...

Oh yeah! Onyx brings the pain! Do not under estimate the power of her fist! The white tux idea sounds awesome now that I think about it...yes... :) Pshh GOLD? Who needs gold? White is the new black! I can guess the drawing Onyx made BTW... Tis BEETLEJUICE OF COURSE!

Its to late to type too much right now so TTFN, Update when you can :D

Great story! I love Freakazoid, yet my brother is the one who got the DVDs and introduce me to it!(I thank him every day)Keep UPDATING! PEACE!

xC.

P.S. The drawing I think is BEETLEJUICE! He is the only person I know who been in a movie, a cartoon, and has mold in his hair... Man, after reading your story I wanted ice cream...

Well, BYE-BYE!

You're right. If I were playing a game like that and someone took off my head I think I would lose for the rest of the game. I love how Freakazoid gets over his shock and loses because of the dinosaur anyway. I mean no insult, but is it me, or do all common thugs say the same thing? And why is it that they're usually men who underestimate the power of women? I liked the thing with Dmitri. I totally wasn't expecting that. Now as for what Onyx was drawing...it's Beetlejuice! Oh, my god! When I first went through this I missed it, but then I went back and noticed the subtle hints, even the title! I LOVE Beetlejuice and I've seen both the movie and the cartoons. Why can't cartoons nowadays be like Beetlejuice and Freakazoid? Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Oooh I wonder if Dex is going to ask Onyx to the dance? And I feel bad for Dimitri, she seems

really cool. I hope that Freakazoid and Onyx's movie outing ends well!

White tux... White tux...

Aww that was mean Frek :(

"Almost as much as I hate math" :'D oh math.

I just stopped in the middle of reading this to watch ran ran ruu. my brain hurts. X(

Onyx just scared me there O.o fun fun! :D

YAY! Dexter next Chapter! :D

It's okay that you forgot Deadpan, she was only in one episode and not for very long. I loved the virtual game thing, that was one of my favorite episodes! I also knew the rhyme! Though the decapitation thing was morbid. What possessed Onyx to take his head off? Good chapter, I'm looking forward to the next.

I'm Baaa-aaaack! Did ya miss me? I have been busy with school so I couldn't participate in that other contest to guess the song. (I listened to it later on just for the heck of it!) I've caught up with the story and I like where it is going! Onyx eerily reminds me of myself: she's mischievous, can hide her emotions very well, and can be creepy/violent at times... but very rarely. The idea of a white tux is a good idea but you need SOME small form of color variation so it doesn't look too "matchy". I can be all white but maybe something (just one thing most likely) like something gold, black, IDK it's your story I'm just throwing out an idea.

As an added note, Steven Spielberg does like to put a dash of adult jokes in his cartoons kids won't catch I mainly see it in Animaniacs. "Only in your computer..." Only 90's cartoons huh? :D

I only watched She's The Man because Amanda Bynes was in it and I like a few scenes (the funny ones of course) especially the one where that guy was towel whipped out of nowhere, I couldn't stop laughing!

...I was going to say something else about the other chapters I missed but I can't remember. Oh well, T.T.F.N!

P.S. Happy late Birthday! Mine is on Jan 29!