|Reviews for Stone Cold|
| DieHardBrendan 11/20/10 . chapter 4
Great story you made on it and I love the ending of it. Jack and Renee we're so pure and perfect. Nothing can change that. Nothing will never change that.
| Lara Cox 9/2/10 . chapter 4
very romantic! I love a happy ending!
| wolfbones17 9/1/10 . chapter 4
Hey, this was pretty good. :) I can understand your displeasure with the last chapter - it felt a little rushed to me, a little out-of-character. (Just subtle things - like how Jack went "ha-ha," which isn't really something I can picture him doing.) But overall, it was a nice story and I liked how it went for chapters 1-3. The scene where he felt her pulse, in particular, I really liked, so I'm glad you didn't stop with a one-shot.
If you want to come back to this in the future, I would focus on the fourth chapter alone, but even it's not that bad. It just needs a little lovin'.
Again, really, REALLY liked the scene where Jack felt her pulse. Very nice. I also liked that Kim came back to NY to stay with her dad and Renee.
| Cherie-24-Addict 9/1/10 . chapter 4
Yay! Good ending. Makes me happy, and it wasn't OOC, either.
| ilive4jeanz 9/1/10 . chapter 4
Oh, please, this ending is adorable! I really like how you played it out, it's nice to have just a simple, happy ending after all they've been through. And I don't know why, but I love how everybody uses 'Abigail' as Renee's middle name, I can actually picture it being that too :P
So congrats on getting a new job, trust me I know what it's like to work all the time, I wasted my whole summer on it :S But, it's nice to see you still took a few minutes to write a great ending to this story :) And don't worry about having 'delayed' updates, people should understand how life gets busy :) At least I know I do :) I can't wait to read your next fic, you're a great writer :) Thanks a lot for sharing :)
| pinkangelxoxo 9/1/10 . chapter 4
I loved the ending. It was everything I always wanted to see on tv but as we all know the writers couldn't let it happen. You did an amazing job. I hope to read more from you.
| blueEyes206 9/1/10 . chapter 4
Awwww! Squeeeeee! :D
Thats all that I can articulate right now because Im watching NCIS, but I just have to say that I love that pretty much everyone picks Abigail as Renees middle name! :)
| McGonagall's Bola 7/17/10 . chapter 3
Ah, you have gone over to past tense. Everything fits so much better now. I'm somewhat surprised that she can talk immediately, but it is true that with a medically induced coma, the chance of lasting damage isn't that big as with coma in which the subject has fallen herself. Medically induced subjects may be waken up by medication, but usually wake up on theit own, when they are ready to live again, to take life in their hands. So I would assume she'll recover faster as was the case with me. I'm happy to see her awake.
| McGonagall's Bola 7/17/10 . chapter 2
Mmm. As much as I like Renee, and Jack, and as much as I hate to be naggy... I should think reviews should be truthful. I personally felt a bit annoyed at the messing about with the tenses. It is harder to write in present time than it is to work in past time, especially if you should work with flashbacks. It may get confusing that way, and it did for me. It doesn't affect anything within the story, so certainly it isn't that big of an issue. However, I'm sure that if you could watch that in the future, your stories would have even more power behind the words, be even more emotional than already is the case. The pace in your story is magnificent. You showed us readers really well when something was rushed, or not, just by the formatting and style of writing. Many writers can't. The coma sounds very familiar to something that I have done, but hey... if we both think it should be fitting, it must be hell of an idea.
| McGonagall's Bola 7/17/10 . chapter 1
Wonderful beginning. There aren't many pieces of fan-fiction on here written in present time, even though it is known that that attracts the reader more. It somehow worked for me as well. I especially liked how you created everything in the hospital as stone cold, how maybe his heart feels the same after seeing her there. Well done!
| xx-crispy-mnms-lover-xx 7/8/10 . chapter 3
| TwentyFourGirl 7/8/10 . chapter 3
YAY! Long live Renee!
I love this, of course! And I love you! :D
| ilive4jeanz 7/7/10 . chapter 3
:) I'm glad you're dad's okay on a side note :)
Of course you're gonna make us wait :P That's mean! XD But I think the wait should be worth whatever your brain can think of for the next part :) Thanks a lot for sharing, I can't wait to read more :)
| Lara Cox 7/5/10 . chapter 3
Hi! I didn;t have much time to read this story until now. But I really liked it! great job!
| Cherie-24-Addict 7/4/10 . chapter 3
"Damn it!" Please update. This story is...well...addicting. I much prefer alive Renee (albeit seriously hurt) to blatantly dead Renee. Great job on the story (and on keeping readers wanting more).