 xPockyNoMikox 2005-06-22 . chapter 11... wow. I swear I've read this before, but even if i have, it was good enough to read again. i'd love it to be longer - it was that good - but i'll definitely read the sequel. you write very well, and you capture emotions so easily. i envy you! the ending was awesome! i honestly don't have any suggestions - the story is perfect. |
 dreamalittledream 2004-12-02 . chapter 7god i like this fic even though i had not finished it yet. hotohori is so sweet! he actually remembered what nuriko wore. and i liked the part when he said nuriko winked. really cute. can imagine him doing it.
can almost imagine how nuriko felt then, being lost and everything. and it must have been hard for others, knowing it was nuriko physically...but someone else mentally. |
 Kitsunes Shinigami 2004-07-25 . chapter 12Aw, i know im probably late on this thing, but i just found it and it was an awsome story! |
 Hitokiri Battousai 2003-06-22 . chapter 12Ryuen-sama, that was just terrific! *bows* you earned my respect when I first read your work, but I just love your stories! I'm glad Nuriko regained his memories, and Hotohori-sama finally
admitted he loved Nuriko! I can't wait to read the sequel! This is going on my favorites list!
Ja Ne,
the local manslayer |
 Butterflygurl 2003-02-12 . chapter 11*sniffle* (actually has tears on her face) OOOOOOOH that is soo, cute, sad and cute...i love it! |
 Crystalmoon217 2002-11-27 . chapter 11That was the sweetest ending ever. I never cry at movies or books but I almost did when I read the part where Nuriko was telling Hotohori to leave his room and he was crushed. Usually I try to leave some helpful suggestions for people but you obviously don't need it. Let fanfiction.net know when your first book comes out! |
 Crystalmoon217 2002-11-13 . chapter 2The first chapter was so sad I couldn't read it in one sitting. And this chapter was even worse!(Like in an emotional way not an I hate your story way of course). Poor Nuriko! He better be able to die the right way or I will do unpleasant things! |
 aikido-chan 2002-08-13 . chapter 12So I saw "Fallen " on the main page and had to come back and read this one, in spite of, or maybe because of, your hilarious summary. I really wanted to find out about Chiriko's tortured past. He dosn't get a lot of good fiction, and you did him justice here.
Great job handling all of the emotional complications - and I'm glad I didn't read this before there was a sequel, or I'd be pestering you to write one. It's too good a premise to let it end there.
On to "Fallen"....
Aikido-chan |
 NK ~,^. 2002-03-23 . chapter 12 ;o;. Whaaaaaaaah! That was so gooooood! I read the whole thing in one go, & I think I need to go hydrate myself before I die from crying so much... ^^.;;;; You did a *wonderful* job on this ficcie, & you *have* to continue it! It's the best 'Nuriko-is-still-alive-or-gets-resurected-after-episode-33-fic' I have ever read!! In my opinion, writing a fic all in one go is the best way to do it, because you just get so into it, & it shows. ^__________^. I can't wait for more. |
 roku kyu 2002-03-04 . chapter 12Yes!! Yes, yes,yes, YESSSSS!!!!! Very, very great story! The last time I reviewed was Chapter 6 or 7...but I could have sworn it was at the end of last week! What a wonderful surprise to see all the new chapters. I LOVE the happy ending (or ending so far). You wrote this story so beautifully, so emotionally that I couldn't stop reading...and as usual, I am AT WORK!! Yes, we need more of this storyline! What will Houki do now? What will happen to the rest of the shichiseishi? The whole story of FY must change from this point onward and I'm looking forward to your creation of an alternate FY universe! Congratulations again on a wonderful job! |
 Chou Ryuuen 2002-03-04 . chapter 12 By Suzaku, I was crying reading that ending. It was soooo good! I loved it! Please write more. |
 Kryssa 2002-03-03 . chapter 11Oh joyous rapture! You put the two of 'em together in a happy way!!! That's so sweet, so touching... too bad it really didn't happen that way in the TV show. I'm so glad this turned out to be happy. |
 Purple Mouse 2002-03-03 . chapter 11Awwwww, I really like the little bits you added. ^___^ And I love this fic!! Congrats on a successful fic monopoly. *shakes hands* Woo!! Nuriko isn't dead and he isn't a zombie!! *throws a party* Can't wait for the sequels. Have fun! |
 Kourin Lucrece 2002-03-03 . chapter 12I really really liked that story!!! It was so good! ^.^ And.. it was imaginative and... I'm rambling.. sorry... Anyway, I really liked your story... |
 Lanen 2002-03-03 . chapter 12Ryuen, like usual, this was an awesome, intricate, and emotional piece of art! *^-^* It was somethat that I was able to attempt to solve along as I read it. (which completely rocks) Imagery, intellectual and emotional imput by all of the central characters, and very well spoken! All of the characters were portrayed perfectly! *^-^* I wish I could write like you! =P Beautiful! I'm dying to follow it! |