|Reviews for Untied Shoelaces|
| ejm12 6/25/12 . chapter 1
Please continue! its super good!
| Serpent91 12/13/10 . chapter 1
Well done. Good start
| blood wolfe 92 8/2/10 . chapter 1
Great story! keep going, i wanna know more!
| iloveme5895 7/31/10 . chapter 1
me like it!
| Nymphadora Potter 7/14/10 . chapter 1
You ought to continue this as a story, it's quite good!
| KIRA FIRE WOLF 7/6/10 . chapter 1
Nice I like please continue
| MadameGiry25 6/27/10 . chapter 1
Overall, I enjoyed this. But some of your Remus dialogue seemed a bit out of character. You might want to consider revising but it is up to you.
But your storyline was quite good.