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| Reviews for Untied Shoelaces |
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   ejm12 6/25/12 . chapter 1Please continue! its super good! |
| Serpent91 12/13/10 . chapter 1 Well done. Good start |
| blood wolfe 92 8/2/10 . chapter 1 Great story! keep going, i wanna know more! |
| iloveme5895 7/31/10 . chapter 1 me like it! *ashley* |
| Nymphadora Potter 7/14/10 . chapter 1 You ought to continue this as a story, it's quite good! |
| KIRA FIRE WOLF 7/6/10 . chapter 1 Nice I like please continue |
| MadameGiry25 6/27/10 . chapter 1 Overall, I enjoyed this. But some of your Remus dialogue seemed a bit out of character. You might want to consider revising but it is up to you. But your storyline was quite good. |
