I freaking loved that!

Yayayyayay!

Finally got around to reviewing your stuff here Love this. I never considered this scenario but I think everyone acted as they would have if it had happened in the anime. Very sweet and LOVE Satomi in this

Awww cutsie! I felt like I was going to cry at some points it was soo cute! And I'm guessing Takuya's tutor was Bokomon? LOL Anyway I really loved how this came out for a few reasons: 1) It has my fav character Kouichi in it :3, 2) I relly think you explored each of the characters feelings well, 3) Family Life, and 4) IT WAS SOOO INCREDIBLY KAWAII IT WaSN'T EVEN FUNNY! I loved it great job and comtinue writing!

Great story. Well written and made quite an interesting read. Good job.