|Reviews for The Icing on the Cake|
| sue273 3/13/12 . chapter 1
What a sticky mess your boys made! It's a good job no one waked in on them while they were 'baking'.
Loved this hot oneshot - you had me chuckling all the way through. I could just imagine Edward's bum print in the frosting!
| RobertsmineIwish 10/5/11 . chapter 1
This story is the icing on the cake;)
| Miss Dare 8/20/11 . chapter 1
Hot, funny and beautifully written:) i loved it!
| mw138 2/6/11 . chapter 1
Yum! That was HOT!
| Lindz26 2/6/11 . chapter 1
Well, I enjoyed this very much. Edward and Jasper slash is m absolute favorite. The image of the two of them all covered in frosting and bent over the counter...yum!
Jasper the little devil..he had no intention of making a cake! LOLOL! I like the way he thinks. I must say, if I had a chance to spend the afternoon with Edward, my mind would not be on baking either.
The ending was funny and adorable! Of course Alice would pick up on the little frosting in the hair. That was great!
| JasperLuver48 2/5/11 . chapter 1
That. Was. HOT! And OMG I want a cake now too (thanks for that) :)
I can see why this is your favorite... it was fantastic :)
And Alice at the end... hilarious :)
| metle 12/29/10 . chapter 1
Fantastic - naugthy boys...I love it...
| sasharose11 10/12/10 . chapter 1
Okay, that was fucking hot. Jasper is a naughty, naughty boy. I just love it.
| VampireLestat12 8/14/10 . chapter 1
Mmmm, the boys are so much better than cake. Loved the lemon frosting! LOL! Frosting in Edward's hair.
| Bforqueen 7/19/10 . chapter 1
Look for my review on this o/s on the Blog tomorrow :-) All I will say is that I kinda crave chocolate cake now...
| Jess110426 7/10/10 . chapter 1
I'm a huge fan of OCDJen, so I'm glad that you wrote this for her b-day, she deserves all the lovin sent her way.
I loved this. the straight forwardness to it all, is just a complete turn on...
| My name is Seren Dipity 7/9/10 . chapter 1
So hot and funny! I loved it! Jen is really lucky to have such an awesome OS for her birthday!
| whitleigh392 7/8/10 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh I love it! It was hott and funny and just yummy! :)
| devastatia 7/6/10 . chapter 1
haha, aww! a little bit sweet and a little bit dirty. the ending was the best though (:
| SomethingAmazing95 7/4/10 . chapter 1
Oh snap! They got caught! Ahahahah, I loved it!