|Reviews for Milestones|
| courtxoneyx3 5/23/13 . chapter 21
you should update :(
| anonymous 3/20/13 . chapter 21
pleeeeeease write more!
| Esthernight 3/16/13 . chapter 21
this isn't the end is it?
| livin-la-vida-loki-d 1/31/13 . chapter 21
I was already on the last chapter when I saw how long it's been since this was last updated but PLEASE update soon! I love this story!
| Omili 11/13/12 . chapter 21
See, normally I try to write these really long reviews, detailing exactly what I liked and what I thought didn't really fit in with the story and so on. You know, trying to give some real constructive critisism (yes, I know I probably spelled that wrong. English isn't my first language so I often struggle a litte)
Back to the point. I think I can't really do what I normally do here, because... I like fucking EVERYTHING you wrote so far!
The way you let things progress, the way you let Shawn think about what he is and is not and freak out about the 'not being able to lable himself' and have these feelings exclusively for Peter and becoming tired of trying to find the right answer to all this. And Peter, what can I say about Peter? Normally I hate original Characters because they have this nasty habit of stealing the spotlight from my favourite Characters who are the reason why I read a fanfiction. But Peter, Peter is just great! I love how he is so understanding and willing to give Shawn time in the beginning and trying to make nice with Cory and not afraid to be who he is and show who he loves but still considering Shawns apprehension and all that.
And I completely adore the romance between the two and the way Peter calls Shawn Sweetheart and that he gave him the book and that Shawn wrote that poem for him. sigh.
And I think its great that Jack and Eric and Angela and everyone is so supportive and understanding. You know, besides Cory, but you wrote him exceptionally well here, because as we know from the series, he really is afraid of change and growth in anything but the things that make him comfortable and that he has envisioned for himself and his friends.
And I would like to write more, to tell you how completely taken I am with this story, but I don't think I can find the words to do so. You know, other than just copying and pasting your whole story into this review to show you which scenes I liked best. :-)
Oh, on a side note: I love Jeremy!
I hope you update this story soon, I will be waiting anxiously on the edge of my seat.
| lydia 10/28/12 . chapter 12
im really loving the story so far! but i have one little thing to say, shawn's eyes are blue not brown
| Guest 9/22/12 . chapter 21
please continue this story soon its really good!
| Toxic Sauna 8/27/12 . chapter 21
Again with the commas.
Your ability to make an obviously straight character gay amuses me.
| Toxic Sauna 8/27/12 . chapter 2
Sometimes you don't use commas when you should. I noticed this before but forgot to mention it.
I realize you're just using Shawn's character as a way to write a gay love story, but I will continue to review seeing as you asked me to.
| Toxic Sauna 8/27/12 . chapter 1
You really need to edit this stuff before publishing. Typos get annoying.
Lots of run-ons. An okay piece.
| Nyiestra 8/15/12 . chapter 21
Goodness, I just entered this fandom and have read almost everything you've written ravenously. You weave great stories, and your mastery of all the characters is fantastic. I'm particularly drawn to Shawn, but am in awe of how well you write Eric; his brand of crazy isn't easy to pull off.
Awesome story. Awesome, beautiful character exploration. I love love love seeing Shawn develop like this outside of Cory. Fantastic job.
| Weasleytwinslover87 8/10/12 . chapter 21
Omg! I'm finally caught up! At first I was weary about reading because Shawn has always been My favorite character and to see him in this light was weird at first but I got so hooked to this story! I love it. I think Peter is kinda a jerk but in some ways I like him too. Can't wait for an update.
| whatweareafreaidof 8/8/12 . chapter 21
good i was afraid that you stop writing, there a difference between hateing someone becouse they are gay, or hating them for who they are, even if they are gay.
| Weasleytwinslover87 8/7/12 . chapter 1
Awesome so far! I can't wait to catch up!
| Rubick 8/4/12 . chapter 21
Thrilled to see an update to this, and I like where the story is going. Cory needs to get smacked around a bit.