A very good question indeed! What on earth could be worse than Lucifer? I believe this one screams, "I want the title, Cliffhanger Queen"! How could you leave us hanging like that? LOL! Really nicely done!

Oh dear! That must have been horrible. :

Glad they all got out of there safely. Be interesting to see how they deal with this.

Loved it. :)

The last line was just like Sam

I liked it xDD That was intense even thought that was short.

Kisses and see you around O/

Rosetta

What is worse?

Tell us?

Aw I love the Winchester sibling love! Worse than Lucifer? I'm sorely tempted to drop Pamela Anderson's but surely she wouldn't do that sort of carnage...unless they insulted her plastics or something, right?

It's a shame you won't be continuing with this (as the Fin suggests) because I'd be intrigued to know what could be worse than Lucifer.

Very well written though, and it's impressive you managed to keep the writing so concise.

Trina

Hahaha Dessert? Oh Deany...you think so off-centre. And surely hunters would be more like main meal, with normal people being starters...not sure what the desserts would be. Chocolates?

I love the "Sam and Bobby stared at him oddly" line - hilarious! Just hilarious!

Although I am curious to know what this is and what they'll do about it.

I liked the different usage of safe in this one - very creative!

Trina

very nice trilogy Vanessa - hope you're going to continue this one

Viv

Ooh, nice use of the word "safe", going for something quite off-centre. Is Hecatomb anything to do with Hecate by any chance? I just wondered.

Well written... I liked the line about the varying degrees of horror - I can imagine some devil-may-care part of Dean thinking "Cool...carnage"!

Trina

Come on, you can't end it there!

OMG! AWESOMELY ended there hun!

incredible stuff!

now THIS is a story I want a full non100words story for what happens next! :D

As Sam said "What the hell can be worse than Lucifer?"

OMG just what is affecting Dean, causing Sam and Bobby to drag him from the house? With the smell of sulphur it could be demonic.

Interesting - wonder what monster they are up against?

Aw holy... this was perfect! Loved every incredible 100-word-chapter, and has someone here already mentioned it? GIMME MORE please - this is flesh and bones to a really thrilling story, just - let's say: 20.000 words or so? Or less, since they are so intense written by you :-) Everyone is absolutely in character - and I loved Bobby, scared and grumpy!

Kudos!

And thanks - many of them :-)

Kate