brilliant. you used simple language very powerful, the repetation was perfect.

wow. i especially love the ending.

"How much would you give for freedom?

Your life."

these words hit me so hard. they r so powerful. well done earth. luv tigger X

All together now "O!" Such strong compassion and feelings. I especially enjoyed the last two lines...really patrotic feelings...I guess we all forget about our freedom costing so much. Harry didn't forget though, he was so passionate and sure about giving his life to the wizarding community even to the people who had mistreated him the most! Good JoB!

Cannot describe. Your wording is perfect. This story is perfect.

"How much would you give for freedom?

Your life."

I love this line. It's a very poignant ending.

Bloody hell. I think I adore you! You are one of the most talented writers I have come across, especially here on . You deserve so much more than this measly page.

Perhaps I could get you to let me host your fics on my webpage. (It is on my bio, though isn't complete at the moment) Which is something, because I stopped archiving fics a long time ago and closed the site I had up. But your fics move me so entirely, I would love to have them. Please, e-mail me at if you are interested.

For some strange reason I feel like crying at the end of this. *sob* It was so emotional...

You got problems, don't ya? good word choice though.

That's pretty good. I like how you draw the reader into your conclusion.

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