aww that was so very cute i loved it so very much

awww... I loved this! :) It was really sweet... but you do have to watch out for a few grammatical/spelling errors. This is for all your stories in general, not just this... I think you have pretty good plot lines, but you have to proof-read it before posting! There are some errors I'm sure you can spot yourself if you re-read your own stories. Um... other than that, I think you should write more! You have a very interesting style of writing *yes, that's good* and I'd like to see more! -

*Whisper (whom you so kindly e-mailed a review to - um, it was you, right?)

It's a cute ending. Definitely sweet. Sometimes, the greatest things in life happen in the blink of an idea (as to the shortnesss).

So, great all the way around.

not your everyday story, i like it

That was cool! you had me scared there for a moment that Davis didn't have the same feeling for his Ken-chan. But that had a cool ending.

Aww, that was so sweet! I loved it! Congratulations!

Wow! I love Kensuke, and that was great! You can never have too much Kensuke! And it was Ken angst too (which tends to be what I write.). Good job - I was convinced.

That's it? Please do more! I want to know what happends!

Hey, I found it after all! Cheers for me! I'm reviewing chapter one second, because that way, I can bookmark it in my faves and find it again later.

Yeah!

*grins maniacally* more more more!

I'm not usually interested in Kensukes, but I'm reading this for some odd reason. You might as well keep going. It's sorta cool, for a kensuke.

did i already review this?

well i'm reviewing it again!

this is still great!

i love angst

i don't know how my mind came up with this

but

this is

happy angst

i don't know...

well, i've already proven my insanity so i suppose being even crazier doesn't matter, eh?

oh well, buh bye

Ooh... pretty good for a first fanfic! Please let this be a happy ending...

If I beg, plead, cajole, and offer bribery, would you consider making this happy? Please? Pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty, pretty please? With cherries, and strawberries, and blueberries, and whip cream, and icecream, and brownies, and caramel sauce, and chocalte sauce, and sprinkles on top? Please?

::squeals:: u're writing is sooo good! i cant believe this is ur first fic... sad, sweet fic...

keep up the great writing! hope to see more fics from u soon! gambatte! qop