Another great on shot. Very suspenseful and creative too!

beautiful

I don't read one shots as a rule, but a friend recommended this and I'm very glad she did. Awesome story!

That's the most unique transformation scenario I've ever read, but it fits with a very unusual Edward/Bella story. He's sure a different character from your mind, than from other authors'.The story of the accident and Bella's injuries got my attention, the rest of it grabbed me by the throat and wouldn't let me go. Bottom line, I really liked it, good job, you should have gotten more than third place, I think.

this story is awesome. not a huge fan of one-shots but i liked this one.

Well hells bells...that was one interesting meeting. Both their backgrounds were fascinating and I love that in the end they were going to be together forever.

MY GOD

SO good is really lovely&sexy

Bella was dying that break my /3

&well Edward always the salvation

of the love of his life

really lovely this story :D

This story was amazing! It was so nice seeing the caring, and the aggressive Edward all in one! :) I'm addicted :)

This was so emotional and beautiful. I'm glad he changed her. The sexy talk about all the places they'd travel to was beautiful imagery. Lovely O/S.

This was a very nice one shot. Well Done on a great short story.

you should continue this it's really good love it.

This story has really great and kind of sad, I am just happy that Edward turned her in the end. I have found stories similar to this one and they all end up with either Edward or Bella dead,those are heartbreaking.

So hot and so sweet!

oh wow that was absolutely awesome i loved it! i loved how edward was still pained to turn her but i mostly love that he bit her during their lovemaking. i've read a couple of other stories where that's happened and i think it's very appropriate given their passionate love for each other! awesome!

Great job, I really loved this one with their connection. I am so glad that Edward in the end turned Bella. It was great to read about how Edward's touch was the only thing that Bella could feel. Great job.