Good story, especially the development we get for both of the twins.

I love how you ended this. It was cool reading it from Master Swoop's POV. Luan and him talking were hilarious. I loved reading this story, it was really great to read. I love your twin stories. Great job!

The way you write them I love them too. This was great; I totally enjoyed this chapter; the ending was perfect with the tie-in to one of the the early chapters.

So... Dustin/Chip now?

A movie in the park, that's awesome. Very cool that Casey got them to do that. I liked their conversation and how they both were able to express how they felt to each other. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love seeing the twins through the others' point of views, it's always so interesting. I don't blame Casey for being upset because he didn't know something like that about Theo, so it was nice when they talked about it. And then Luan coming and also talking was really cool too. I wonder what Casey is going to do?

By the way, love the referencing Ninja Academy.

That was really good. I liked when Theo was thinking during the battle about how Luan and Lily were both going to 'mother hen' him, that is so perfect and so true.

I loved how you did RJ's thoughts in seeing Luan. And it was cool when his animal spirit was also interested. I loved how there was the translation with what they were saying.

Great chapter.

This was great. Oo, last chapter! Dustin/Chip chaos is coming! Yeah. Not that I don't like Theo/Luan brotherly fics, I do, but Dustin/Chip chaos is so epic when you do it. Actually, a lot of your PR fanfics are epic. Including this one. Gak. I ramble like Fran. Sorry.

Is it just me or is it always Casey who gets entangled or creates the most absurd yet epic plans?

I love this fanfic but I want you to update & finish it soon so the continuation of the Dustin/Chip chaos can begin!

I like this story, probably more than the actual episode because we get some development for Theo.

Nice addition to the piece. It's hard to imagine what would hurt more, getting the glass out, or all the questions about his twin brother showing up.

Looking forward to the next one.

Go RJ! This has been just as great as ever. I can't wait for the Rangers' confusion next time! Yeah... I always wondered why Rita & Zedd never attacked during school hours. I mean, Elsa was the principal so that explains DT. But still.

Anyway, this has been a great chapter. I totally enjoyed it.

I loved the Master Swoop and Luan conversation. That was so awesome. Master Swoops' comments were great, but I also loved Luan's reaction.

And Luan with Theo in his head is awesome.

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Luan & Master Swoop 'battling'... epic! This is great; I can't wait for an update! (And no, not just because I want 'Brothers in Arms' to come out soon; I'm enjoying this fanfic on its own merits)

Of course Theo would get hurt, but I love how you have that whole "Morpher equals instant healing", that was great, and so perfectly true.

I love how Luan was acting with Theo, it was so sweet. I'm glad that he was there.

YEAH! I enjoy this story but wrap it up fast! Theo is great, but Dustin/Chip is even better! I bow before your superior PR fanfic writing skills.