thats cool and deep

A great little piece. I had to laugh at Jake Morgandorffer being a superman

Well, thats a slightly different take on the 'Ol Jakey's not as bad as you thought, eh?" idea. Good story.

Kick-ass stroy, except that Todd's car is a Plymouth Duster, not a Chevy Camaro(unless Jake doesn't know this). Nevertheless, I don't think I need to join the chorus of readers begging for a sequel, because I know you've already considered one, and I'm glad.

I never knew Jake was this deep. Anyway, this is a cool story and I like the semi-cliffhanger ending but maybe you could write a epilogue of sorts, 20 or 30 years in the future when he's a grandfather?

hey, great story. Thought about a seconed chapter? perhaps someone else becomeing "superhuman"? even the introduction of a "supervillian"? it would be so interesting.

Good story! _ A sequel would be interresting.

That's very interesting, very well written.

Best part is that it's fathomable.

I love this one.

Continue it, please, and I think that a certain glasses-wearing cynic would be perfect for powers, namely something that will make her see the world for what it is.

Jake's likely gonna die in the next year, between the Yutz-related stress and the Quirk, and that fact mixed with her coming into society, and dealing with the ups and downs of powers, can make for extensive and powerful storytelling.

Continue this, **Please!**

A good strong beginning for a promising series (I hope that's what this is). I forsee a difficulty in keeping the characters faithful to their true personalities as they either gain super powers of their own or simply discover that Jake has them. Of course half the point here is that Jake isn't really who he seems, but the other characters presumably still are and I hope that comes through in future chapters. So far, although the story is enjoyable and thought-provoking, there's not a lot of "Daria" in it.

While reading and later thinking about this story, I thought up some ideas about future episodes that I would be happy to share with the author. Erin, you know how to reach me!