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| Reviews for Invitation |
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   Hazeldene 1/24/13 . chapter 1Congratulations on a fabulous story. It was tragically sad, eroticly romantic, great character development, beautiful prose, all in such a short story. I love the mix of Twilight and Dracula vampire lore, while still portraying the familiar self hatred of Edward, and the mutual instant attraction between Edward and Bella. I like the introduction of Carlisle as the usual moral moderator. Ambiguous, but tragic end. As usual, Edward denies himself what he desires, and does what he thinks is best for Bella, but, as usual, its not what Bella wants for him. I really like your writing style, the win in this competition was well deserved. |
| Nicola Charalambou 10/11/12 . chapter 1 Brilliant x |
| Edward'sDJ 8/11/12 . chapter 1 Lovely balance between creepy and sweet. |
| CommaQueen2 7/21/12 . chapter 1 Wow, this was beautiful. So well written. I'm a huge fan of your writing. |
| Andrew'sAmy 7/12/12 . chapter 1 Loved it. So dramatic and mysterious. Thanks! :) |
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 1 Ah...,... That was so sweet and sad write more like this please |
| 4MeJasper 6/1/12 . chapter 1 This was an amazing and touching story. You only gave sketches, so much was left to our own imagination. I didn't think he is setting himself up for death, like some of the other reviewers - was this an ambivilent point, or did you intend him to die in the sunrise? |
| Zhee 5/29/12 . chapter 1 Amazing! |
| csp4 3/29/12 . chapter 1 Interesting:) |
| I hate angst 10/19/11 . chapter 1 Did Edward die in the end? why did you kill him? :'( Please tell me he didn't die... |
| Liz Ben 9/26/11 . chapter 1 lovely story. well-deserved win. the changes to canon - they feel so natural. that "boy who looked lost" will be etched in my mind. (the tears of blood though.. doesnt sit well with me. does he jizz blood too? but then... it is your story. ) congratulations on the win. |
| LostIntimidation 4/18/11 . chapter 1 Lovely story, and such a deliciously ambivalent ending! |
| Manda CullenMccartyWhitlock 2/20/11 . chapter 1 Amazing fic. I'm assuming he dies in the end as u wrote that he felt the sun rise... what a horrible end. I think he could have changed her and not killed her. But alas this is ur fic... and I LOVED it! manda |
| CMGeek 1/13/11 . chapter 1 I can't believe I missed this. I've fallen in love with a lot of your stories and this is no different. Surely deserved the win. Nicely done sweetie! Crissa |
| princessnerra 1/10/11 . chapter 1 Interesting story. So that's it he's not going to turn her? Is there going to be an Epilogue? |
