Aww, I loved it! This is absolutely going on my favorites!

You konw what i really like about this? That Nick wears IrishSpring soap. My dad wears IrishSpring soap and I thuoght that was cool. You gave me a real reason to HATE stone, even though he said that thing about Macy bringing it out in Nick. The crazyness thing. I never liked him, even if he is kinda cute, but that line made me like him a little. i like how you went in and described the thoughts and stuff. I thought it was really cool and stuff to see what Nick and macy were thinking during the episode. You did really good. Love helena

Ahh I quite adore this. When i was watching the episode I sooo wanted a concrete reason to hate Stone, and now you've gifted me one! From here on out as far as I'm concerned Stone is a complete butthead )

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Just so you know, I'm ashamed to know this... but Nick does, in fact, wear cologne. Polo Black, if I'm not mistaken. xD

I really love this story, you know. You went above and beyond my expectations. I was just expecting something about how Stone's cologne was a bit too strong for Macy, but you really made this into something special. I liked seeing the episode from Macy's point of view-all the things she'd been doing while Nick was floundering in his own guilt.

What really makes this great is the subtle comparisons between JONAS and Stone, how you manage to create this parallel. The contrast of the Irish Spring versus Stone's nauseating cologne was cute and Macy's slow realization that Stone wasn't who he appeared to be made me smile.

Honestly? I think she would have said no right there if Nick hadn't jumped in for her. But I love how you managed to write this. :)

All in all, it's just fantastic.

Love,

Beth.

I love that you posted these as soon as you could. Did you have a Camp Rock flashback when Nick said "Good different"? I like that the icky surfer wore too much cologne. That seemed very in character. And then the contrast with Nick at the end was very cute.