|Reviews for A Simple Thing|
| Miss Unohana-Chan28 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Aaaooowww ! beautiful fanfic on Seirei No Moribito !
I like very much the ambiance that you describe, and you respect the personality of each characters, Torogai particularly. After, I love very much the end, so cute ! But, I have little difficulty to see Balsa as mother with a young child. And only the magic of the fanfics who can ensure this events.
Thanks for the fanfic, it was really nice to read !
(Sorry for the grammatical errors, I speak french... )
| Zoe 6/4/12 . chapter 1
For a moment, I thought this was a translation of excerpts from the novels as your characterisation was spot-on. There was a sense of regret that it was fanfic 'cos I enjoyed it very much.
| kerricarri 12/22/11 . chapter 1
This satisfies the incredible itch I have for this pairing. I love how you play with gender roles and marriage dynamics, as well as the pregnancy itself. The imagery of a heavily pregnant warrior woman still dangerously wielding a competent spear is a vivid and scary one. And cool!
I also like Tanda's observation of Balsa feeling safe in the arms of the person who heals her, not the one who protects her. There's a simplicity and unsaid-words-subtext to this tone that's nice, calm, and gentle like Tanda. He seems to just go with the flow, which is inevitably in the same direction as Balsa, though I wonder whether or not she'd be willing to have him with her on her journeys unless she's crossed the point of exasperation with his stubbornness to join her.
| AnimeCrazed121 8/9/11 . chapter 1
AWWWWE Tanda and Balsa are so perfect together! I love how they fit so perfectly and their past together really shows that even if they were to get married, nothing would change. They would always love eachother.
| StoppingMotors 8/14/10 . chapter 1
Daaaaaw. Lovely. :3
| unkeptsecret 7/6/10 . chapter 1
Very nice! I was looking for something like this to appear in the archive one day. :-)
| bansheeblue13 6/30/10 . chapter 1
man...i was cravin' some tandaxbalsa too.
| nijibug 6/28/10 . chapter 1
You Author's Note reflects my sentiments exactly. Thank you for writing this, the characterization was simple but actually echoed the novels very well. This is such a sweet story!