| Reviews for Mengapa |
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This Iz Pointless 1/7/11 . chapter 1I still can't PM you, darn it! Goodness! Sorry. I just hate needing to talk to you by reviewing your stories. I'm really sorry, but I couldn't help it! So. No, Matt is not a spy. I just realized that I forgot to tell you that. NO. Matt's not a spy. He's Kira's bodyguard. *wipes forehead.* Phew. Good thing I asked people what they were thinking. Matt's not a spy! He's an exorcist. A rather failish/demon-powered one because of Zhant and Mello's problem with Caliber earlier. But anyway, Matt's Kira's bodyguard. Much love and a wish to PM you sometime soon, -TIP |
yukka-keehl 7/5/10 . chapter 1hi, ficmu bagus. nyeritain tentang misa, i like it!. sorry i'm late to read and give a review. gomen...! |
jiyulie 6/28/10 . chapter 1Well, I pretty much understand the point of this story. (Not to mention I pretty much liking it D) however, the tenses and the grammar are... Err... Kinda bad that it confuses me. Keep on learning though, I'll be expecting the next work D |
Claire Barbossa 6/28/10 . chapter 1Hai, Aeleita. salam kenal. . fic mu bagus loh. tentang misa ya. saya bisa menangkap intinya kok. walau memang masih ada beberapa kalimat yang canggung, tapi kamu dah berani untuk mencoba. saya sangat menghargai hal itu. saya suka orang-orang yang mau mencoba. hope u understand my words. LOL coz my english is bad too. . keep writting, especially in Indonesia. |
ryuuchihame 6/28/10 . chapter 1Wuah.. i like i like! Hebat ya, bisa menulis bahasa Indonesia, walau kalimatnya tertukar tukar. Berjuang ya With smile |
liliavioleta 6/28/10 . chapter 1hai, saya suka cerita kamu! tata letak kalimatnya sedikit tertukar! tapi saya suka! saya sendiri belum bisa membuat cerita bahasa inggris. tetapi kamu bisa membuat cerita bahasa indonesia. kalau begitu saya akan berusaha. keep writing! xD 1729 chocostrawberry |