 Midnight Run inthe Rain 5/3/12 . chapter 1So cute! So damn cute! I giggled just trying to picture this. I even felt disappointed when America failed each time. Thank you for writing this! |
 Luigi1997 12/24/11 . chapter 1These made me giggle a lot XD |
 blurry19 12/6/11 . chapter 1LOL! So fail, but so cute! |
 Cherrychan88 11/15/11 . chapter 1You.
I love you for writing this. xD
-fave- |
 RealityDreamsii 7/5/11 . chapter 1hahahah
you are one of my favorite Authors now.
that just killed me c:
no it made my whole day become from sad to just funny. thank you for making my birthday a wholee lot better C: |
 UnknownMiracle 4/20/11 . chapter 1Ahaha. That was funny.
Oh the cheesy lines. If those ever come up in my life (doubtful, but still), I'll be sure to think back to these.
I especially loved the one about the burger. Well, at least Alfred was himself, right? ;D |
 Murasaki Argenteria 1/23/11 . chapter 1XD OMG! Hilarious! XD You should make a mini-series for this! XD Like, how Hungary always messes up with this sort of stuff, since someone could retort that her advice 'never works' because one- she'd thinking girl, and two- she can't even get Austria herself XD Lol! |
 Hana1225 12/30/10 . chapter 1Ahahaha
you're amazing!
Hauuu
that was crazy...in a good way, maybe |
 mymanisfictional 12/28/10 . chapter 1Oh gosh, poor Arthur. I should've known it was Hungary supplying the pick-up lines... |
 alguien22792 11/2/10 . chapter 1LOL the pick up lines were so lame, and England's retorts were so funny XD |
 yoni-mieru 10/4/10 . chapter 1I'm grinning like a maniac right now :D
Ooh, and this reminded of a rather 'America' pick-up line:
"I'll be the Burger King, and you'll be McDonalds: I'll have it your way, and you'll be loving it" (can't resist ) |
 PiratedxHearts 9/27/10 . chapter 1-makes incoherent gasping noise-
I can't believe I didn't review on this one either!
Such a bad Mattie ;A;
This one was so much fun too!
Pfft McGorgeous ;D
I'm sure Arthur would rather shoot himself in the foot than be referred to as a burger XD
Ahh Hungary how we love you, especially when pairing up with Alfred.
How on earth did she rope in Alfred of all people? I think she secretly tried to convince Matthew but Gilbert went all protective and was like "Don't even think about it."
So she made Alfred her victim instead :D
It's hard to say who suffered more, Artie or Al? XD
This was way too much fun to help with though
All the best, Mattie the Awesome (Yes I just went Prussia on your reviews 8D) |
 Taroschain 9/9/10 . chapter 1Hey, whaddaya know, the pick-up lines worked! Sure they just annoyed Arthur until he asked Alfred out instead, but they did result in a date! XD |
 Cacow 8/5/10 . chapter 1Ahaha, I am NOT going to Hungary for pick-up lines...ever. 9Not that I am going to use any, any time soon...or ever, so cheesy -shudders-) despite the cheese, I liked this story, it was funny and I found the conversations between Hungary and America so funny!
"How many plans do you have, anyways?" lol |
 Flor de ceibo 8/3/10 . chapter 1... I actually bursted out laughing, hard, at the "If you were a burger, you'd be a McGorgeous."
I smiled through the entire fic, but that line was genius, my God. |