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Midnight Run inthe Rain 5/3/12 . chapter 1
So cute! So damn cute! I giggled just trying to picture this. I even felt disappointed when America failed each time. Thank you for writing this!
Luigi1997 12/24/11 . chapter 1
These made me giggle a lot XD
blurry19 12/6/11 . chapter 1
LOL! So fail, but so cute!
Cherrychan88 11/15/11 . chapter 1
You.

I love you for writing this. xD

-fave-
RealityDreamsii 7/5/11 . chapter 1
hahahah

you are one of my favorite Authors now.

that just killed me c:

no it made my whole day become from sad to just funny. thank you for making my birthday a wholee lot better C:
UnknownMiracle 4/20/11 . chapter 1
Ahaha. That was funny.

Oh the cheesy lines. If those ever come up in my life (doubtful, but still), I'll be sure to think back to these.

I especially loved the one about the burger. Well, at least Alfred was himself, right? ;D
Murasaki Argenteria 1/23/11 . chapter 1
XD OMG! Hilarious! XD You should make a mini-series for this! XD Like, how Hungary always messes up with this sort of stuff, since someone could retort that her advice 'never works' because one- she'd thinking girl, and two- she can't even get Austria herself XD Lol!
Hana1225 12/30/10 . chapter 1
Ahahaha

you're amazing!

Hauuu

that was crazy...in a good way, maybe
mymanisfictional 12/28/10 . chapter 1
Oh gosh, poor Arthur. I should've known it was Hungary supplying the pick-up lines...
alguien22792 11/2/10 . chapter 1
LOL the pick up lines were so lame, and England's retorts were so funny XD
yoni-mieru 10/4/10 . chapter 1
I'm grinning like a maniac right now :D

Ooh, and this reminded of a rather 'America' pick-up line:

"I'll be the Burger King, and you'll be McDonalds: I'll have it your way, and you'll be loving it" (can't resist )
PiratedxHearts 9/27/10 . chapter 1
-makes incoherent gasping noise-

I can't believe I didn't review on this one either!

Such a bad Mattie ;A;

This one was so much fun too!

Pfft McGorgeous ;D

I'm sure Arthur would rather shoot himself in the foot than be referred to as a burger XD

Ahh Hungary how we love you, especially when pairing up with Alfred.

How on earth did she rope in Alfred of all people? I think she secretly tried to convince Matthew but Gilbert went all protective and was like "Don't even think about it."

So she made Alfred her victim instead :D

It's hard to say who suffered more, Artie or Al? XD

This was way too much fun to help with though

All the best, Mattie the Awesome (Yes I just went Prussia on your reviews 8D)
Taroschain 9/9/10 . chapter 1
Hey, whaddaya know, the pick-up lines worked! Sure they just annoyed Arthur until he asked Alfred out instead, but they did result in a date! XD
Cacow 8/5/10 . chapter 1
Ahaha, I am NOT going to Hungary for pick-up lines...ever. 9Not that I am going to use any, any time soon...or ever, so cheesy -shudders-) despite the cheese, I liked this story, it was funny and I found the conversations between Hungary and America so funny!

"How many plans do you have, anyways?" lol
Flor de ceibo 8/3/10 . chapter 1
... I actually bursted out laughing, hard, at the "If you were a burger, you'd be a McGorgeous."

I smiled through the entire fic, but that line was genius, my God.
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