This works as a standalone piece, but it makes me want more.

It's good for her. I never liked Elsa it's all her fault that everything happened.

Oh plz make more!

Amazing story, I love it. I can't wait to read more.

this was okay keep wirting and i'll keep reading and you never know i might love it, right now i just like it though XD XD keep going though

I just saw this movie yesterday and it left me wondering what was next! I hope you continue it sounds great so far!

looks interesting so far looking forward to more

Finally, fanfiction of my recent favourite movie. You might not know, but i often went here while hoping to see a "splice" section. Regardless, i could review your story regarding grammer but im a "plot" person so ill wait to see where this is going.

Its more enjoyable this way.