Will this story be updated?I like it so far.

Nothing's just "in you head" Mikey...

sadness...poor mikey! i hope donny will be okay! will raph get into a fight? will casey be alright? will hun get his face smashed in(again)?

Update soon

Yay! We get to see more of Kari! And Mikey just isn't getting a break, is he? Hopefully things will get easier for him at school once Leo and Raph come back... or will they? :O

Mikey...Mikey...Mikey...
Raph: HA! Ya got triple Mikey'd!
Mikey: No fair! Why not 'Triple Raph'd' He's the one who's skipping school and going behind splinters back!
Me: And you're the one who's ignoring what splinter taught you about never ignoring your instincts!
Mikey: ...touche
Me: Whatever, update soon! and wow that update was up fast!

OOOH MORE PLEASE

Deep chapter, very thought provoking. Well done.

awwwww i feel sorry 4 raphie with all his bottled up feelings and all... sadness! great story, update soon!

Poor Mikey :( I think Raph's feeling pretty guilty right now to shove that on his little bro. Always excited about updates on this story *bows down* I'm not worthy!

nqh, not me. Don't really care about the Olympics.
besides, it's all that's on the TV here in Ireland! my mum said there was an Earthquake in Iran and it hasn't even been on the news cause all they put on is the Olympics...it's getting REALLY annoying.
Amazing Chap BTW. Poor Raphie :(

awwwwwwww...cute!

omg i am so happy that u finally updated! *squeals in joy*

Not a problem.
A beta reader would help, since another person can catch those mistakes we don't. (Been at the stage of "I really didn't catch THAT?")

Loved, loved, LOVED