I like it! Much better than the actual turning scene...lol

this story started off really strong! i'm looking forward to seeing where you're gonna go with this

lol, i freaked out when i read this was yours since the TWBB didnt give names...cannot wait for more!

Im not sure what to say here but so far i like what i read. Hope you keep writing

Great story. Edward a bit over-dramatic as usual but then he wouldn't be Edward without the melodrama. please update again soon.

OOh, I love this story. Loving melodramatic Edward. I really want to see this from Bella's point of view. That is going to be great. I also really want to see what happens when the change is over and Bella wakes up. Edward's gonna get it! Emmett having a male singer, that's freaking hilarious! Thanks for sharing and I look for to all updates from you!

Great'

what a great opening chapter! cant wait for the rest.

Oooh I love this! Is this a one-shot, or will there be multiple chapters because that would be great! Loving the idea of pissed of vamp bella!

He was very dramatic wasn't he, very teenager-ish. :)

Thanks for sharing.

-MJ

I like this horny not pacient Edward ;)

cant wait for Bella to kick his ass haha

please make another chapter for this in Edward's point of view i really liked it.

ooooh! Interesting. Is this going to be a full story?

I loved him! And I want some more of him. Is this just going to be the two shot? This one and the BPOV? Or are you planning to continue it further?

Congrats! Doesn't surprise me at all that the judges found the story full of win!

I really enjoyed this alternate look at B&E's union.