Just found this and absolute love it. Please continue

Ahh! No u must update! I'm officially in love with ur story and can't wait to see what happens between englehorn and Lorana.

- EBS -

Seriously, I started crying! This is an amazing story and you are and amazing author! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue!

OMDOMDOMDOMDOMD I HAVEN'T REVIEWED IN AAAAAAAGGEEEEEES SO NOW I FEEL ALL HOOORIIIBLLLLLLE D8 D8 D8 I'm sorry...

So... another BRILLIANT chapter, I loved the idea of Lorana giving Jimmy the 'Heart of Darkness'. Nice touch :)

Though if I'm being 100% honest I thought that the conversation between Hayes and Englehorn at the end was slightly cheesy. But I suppose it's kinda hard to write Englehorn being 'soft' as in the film he is always quite hard and unreadable.

In any case, brilliant!

I like this story a lot. I like Lorana. She seems qute formidable :)

Nice! I like the little details you put in that most people wouldn't think would matter and would ignore them. Such as the newsboy hat.

Very nice indeed!

I really hope you can update, it's a really good story.

I really like this story! This is the first one I've read where it's an Englehorn/OC pairing! Please update it soon !

a bit over dramatic but its still good.

*grins* yay update! Good chapter and action! Can't wait for the next!

I still love your story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

This was good. ]

Awesome! D

Wow this holds a lot of drama. Cant wait to read more! D

this is great! Its starting to look really suspenseful (even though I saw the movie before). I cant wait to read more. D