Really looking forward to the next! Always wondered about M.B's and Rusty's mother.

This story got stupid so I ain't gonna continue tah read. I'm outta here!

This story is the best one I've ever found so far for Rumble Fish. What I don't understand is why people don't make very many Rumble Fish fanfics.

(thats my real name on here, i just didn't sing in)

My gosh, that was... Beautiful. There are no other words to describe that. The world choice was phnonmanal. I especially like this part

"It was a motorcycle, but not a machine. If you went looking for its motor, you would find a beating heart. It ran on blood instead of gasoline."

It really shows Mottercylce Boy's love for them. If your not a best selling author in the next 10 years, i'd be surprised!

Just wondering, How long did that chapter take to write? Was it hard? It so well written!

Rumble Fish is easily my favorite S.E. Hinton book and I always wanted to explore the Motorcycle Boy more and your fic has given me the confidence that I can pull him off, thank you.

Nu, why is the motorcycle Boy leaving?

Well, good chapter anyways. Please update...within the next 6 months, lol.

Yay! You updated!

Oh my God, please continue this story! You're a great writer, and there's just not enough Rumble Fish fanfics out there. And I think the way you write is similar to S.E. Hinton too, and I love it!

Seriously, please update this!

Okay, so...I really miss this story! I hope you decide on a part 2 :)

yes! thanks for the update!It was great, both chapters, and I can't begin to tell you how much the part concerning his mom relates with my own fic,lol. Not the point! The point is that I want you to continue for as long as you can! Love this :)

Wow, that's pretty awesome way for him to find out his Mom is in California. I can't wait for more, update please!

Rusty-James cares more for Motorcycle Boy than, his brother does for Rusty-James, it's kind of sad. Update soon please.

update...? :'(

You are an excellent writer- channeling S.E. herself in moments. Please keep'em coming. The only part I didn't like was when he interrupts the nurse to tell her his street name. It seems at odds with hiim not wanting anyone to know he is hospitalized.

You just keep updating! :D And I'm still loving it!

Let me say that I am very impressed with how well you are remaining in character as the story progresses. Awesome job with that.

I wonder...is our lovely Motorcycle Boy ever gonna be released from the hells of the hospital? lol. Oh, and you keep us on our toes with his real name? Are you going to give us one? ;)