The tension between them caused tingles in the palms of my hands.

I'm sad that this is completed. :c

It's wonderful though. c:

I'd love it immensely if you wrote more for this pairing!

All I can say is wow. That was very deep the tension between them was thick. Poor Jordan and Ruby too. I wish the show had continued I had my fingers crossed that they weren't related, but like you said we'll never know, but this piece was amazing. i can't wait for you to write more. )

this was amazing stuff :) I always thought they belonged together too.

That was absolutely gorgeous. A lovely one shot and it would be great if you did a sequel, if not its just as great like that. Great job.

Amazing! This deserves a sequel.

That was just fucking gorgeous.