Beautiful. Just simply gorgeous. The simplicity of Kenshin and Kaoru's convictions are what make this scene so potent. You have this enviable talent of making your set up so much like the spirit of Haiku-so deep with saying so little. I love it.

Great one-shot! I love the way you completed the Jineh's "saga"! Very good job!

well done! Interesting and in depth

Very cute! Really laughed at the part where Kenshin was scheming for Sano to attack that elderly lady's booth when drunk, haha!

Loved it!

AW! Now that was really cute.. X3

Ari chan

That was a very nice read. Very in character and very well written. Loved it.

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Very nice. Recently watched the OVA and I liked the symbolism of him washing his hands. You could see the same in your story. Nicely done. I love the irony of him waiting until things are peaceful since that would be nearly a year later. I'll check for some of your more recent writings.

Aww! So sweet! It's just like Kenshin to stay up late trying to do the impossible - like getting dried blood out of silk - isn't it. I also love how you characterized Kaoru; her exasperation is both palpable and perfect.

Keep writing!

That's great. I love the reflective air you have to it, and Kaoru's reaction is dead on xD

Aww! You portray Kenshin and Kaoru just like they are in the manga/anime...its great! The insights into important scenes from the manga are lots of fun to read!

Another very nice one shot.

Awesome story. I loved it.

Another of your stories I really liked! Damn, you're good!

wow... How old is this thing? I don't care, I love it! So reobust and satisfying for a oneshot. Excellent diction and syntax. Just luverly. I must remember to definitely check out your other fics!

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