so cute

It always irks me when people apologize for "sucky fics". It was a good piece, don't be too hard on yourself.

Shigure-san.

It actually wasn't as fluffy as you made it seem (which is a good thing) but that may be because I love pure fluff! great story:)

really cute )

dont give up writing finchel! you def got the characters down. i can totally imagine finn saying all that stuff in the minimalist way he has. great job!

hope theres more chapter awesome work

one edit needed:

take out the last line.

it didn't suck.

this was really good! can wait for more!

This does not 'suck' one bit! I think its dead sweet and very well written, I love the interaction between Rachel and Finn- again so sweet- and I also love the main idea:D Keep up the good work... pretty please? :D

Sweet!