AW SO SWEET LOLOLOL

Damn, man, you gotta continue this!

Wow lol

Great story!

cute

i read thsi one last year as well as a hand ful of ur other fics when i didnt have an account. I luv thsi one too! i remember readin this like 8 or 7 times!

Sorry, I just through Plank from Ed, Edd, and Eddy in the fireplace. (Holds flamethrower with a sick smile) I'm a pyro! OOOK now, the men are here to take me away again, but as for the fic, it was amazing. It was really, really cool. I liked it a lot. Okay, gotta go now. Bye! *Sugar is good*

Very cool!

Uh, it was OK, but there were some screw ups. For example, I think TKs last name is Takashi. No other screw ups. Only 1. Well, gotta run. Great fanfic!

...speechless... I swear, the best Takari story ever! #1 on my top 5! How do you do it, Artemis? Gees, you are so talented it scares me. Here's the critic, fainting from this story.

T.K&Kari for eva

Great story. I loved it. Great job.

O.o write a sequel...and I think maybe Kari should of thrown up when she found out who would be Romeo

Awwww... how nice. Me likes. Takari 4 Life!

Excellent! Loved every line(well almost, anyway)