Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.

This is such a good story. Hope to read more soon. :)

*ZOMGTWITCHSEIZURE*

Okay, sorry, containing myself.

But I really do love this. And I friggin' love Jason. I'd almost lost all hopes for a good oc story, so thanks for replenishing my faith.

I'll be awaiting the next chapter!

- Veg

it was really good. i loved how Hoyt came in at just the right... i'd have been pissed. slow or not you never wanna interrupt that... it creates too many awkward mentalities. i can't wait to see how the story progresses, especially the relationship between Jason and Jill. I love Jason!

I really hope you continue your story. I really like it! I'm hoping for a few steamy scenes featuring our favorite Jason. Hehe. Please continue!

i absolutely lovelovelove the first chapter! please update soon!

A great start cant wait for the next chapter.