|Reviews for Lux Crystallis|
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/29/13 . chapter 26
Well, well, well. That was amazing! You are a very talented author to have kept a firm hold on my attention throughout the whole plot! Your details were phenomenal- dispensed to a certain degree as to where I felt as though I was right next to our lovely protagonists the whole ride! I'm certain you can tell what my favorite part was, but you had me on the edge of my seat practically the whole time! You had me sitting in my school classroom zoning out about what I was anticipating of what was to come! From Prompto's snarky remarks, to fighting horrid battles, all the way to the NoctNiv you gave us, this story was spectacular! And I 100% can NOT wait to start the sequel that I know you have to skill to make just as good- if not better- than Lux Crystallis! Thank you for giving me the chance to read this masterpiece, it will be a long time before I forget it.
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/29/13 . chapter 25
:3 You're very welcome! But it appears as though I still have one more chapter to read! I liked how Noctis' daddy issues were somewhat resolved in this chapter but I have yet to learn how Noctis can see the light! Hopefully that shall be revealed in the next chapter- in which you will receive my most heartfelt review for this story :)
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/29/13 . chapter 24
Beautiful job writing this chapter :3 I had absolutely no problem picturing the whole thing :) Niveus being there was kinda sweet though :3 It made me have an 'awwww' moment. I'm glad she was there too, had she not been- I'd be sitting here cussing Noctis out for simply turning around XD
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/29/13 . chapter 23
Hold on a second, I thought Noctis died at the end of the last chapter? I'm lost DX Niveus' death was so sad! It reminded me of when Xion died in KH 358/2 Days :( When everyone was flipping out about Noctis' eyes, at first I thought it was because a tear had fallen down his face, LOL. The end battle did seem a little rushed, but it was great nonetheless :) Now, how are they going to escape hell? To the next chapter! :D
| LeahFlux 1/29/13 . chapter 11
Ah the joy! Gladiolus getting smacked by a branch xD that mental image was so funny I can't stop laughing xDD
Wonder who is that girl. This is rather suspicious and I have a bad feeling about this but I'll assume she's related to the Crystal somehow since she refers to Niv as a sistaa! LOL.
Sorry for my late feedback. Life has been getting in the way :(
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/28/13 . chapter 22
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! What the hell? Dammit, Niveus what is wrong with you? No! That is not what was supposed to happen!
I was pleased with how the first part of the chapter went... I started laughing when Ignis stated that he had been aiming for Acantha's head... XD LOL
What is up with all the plot twists? It's so addicting! I really didn't see the green haired dude killing Creon coming at all! Maybe I should just expect the least expected for this story! But Noctis can't be dead... Not for long at least.
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/28/13 . chapter 21
Dayyyyuuuummm! That was the best chapter yet! Okay, so at the beginning when Noctis got that bad feeling, I immediately got it too. That feeling got even worse when Noctis decided to dive into the water! It was not going to have been that easy! And when Noctis kept telling Niveus not to go into the water, I was like 'shit's about to go down' XD So of course when that Acantha chick popped up I was like 'well this is gonna be a bitch' But wait! There was hope! Until Noctis ordered Prompto to lower his shotgun. He had a perfect shot, I was positive he wouldnt have missed- I would have told him to go for it! But noooooooo, of course not. The situation was bad how it was but then she made him choose? I was almost positive he was going to pick Niveus over the crystal! And when that bitch broke it? My jaw dropped! Prompto should've taken the damn shot! I absolutely loved how you wrote Cid's reaction to Prince Noctis though XD Nicely done. Good job with Sloan too! I was wondering when we would see him again and just when Gladiolus was going to deck him into tomorrow XD Awesome! But, I'm not done yet! I thought that chapter couldn't get better... Until they jumped out of the airship! I mean, holy shit! I am truely in awe! If this review doesn't make you want to write more, I'm afraid nothing will! I need to continue reading! :D
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/28/13 . chapter 20
Nice! Look at Prompto and Noctis being all epic! I'm glad Noctis finally found a way to really kick some ass! Still can't wait for the final battle, good thing that monster thing had a whole stash of crystal shards! I'm wondering what will happen next, are they going to the Underworld or just facing Creon and the other miscriet helpers already? I'm pumped to read more! Way to keep me hooked :D
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/28/13 . chapter 19
Awwww :) We got a little NoctNiv moment :3 Kind of a slow moving chapter, but we got some info :D Just how many more crystal shards are there? I'm ready for the final battle with Creon! :D
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/27/13 . chapter 18
Definitely did NOT see that coming! How are they going to get out of this one? I'm really curious how you get all of these amazing ideas! It's unbelievable! I feel like I'm watching a blockbuster Fantasy movie! Very well done!
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/27/13 . chapter 17
LOL! I was like 'Chocobos!' when it was talking about their ride and the green food XD I had fun picturing everyone with their Chocobos :3 Except little neglected Niveus... This chapter was very well written, especially in detail. The 'she' Mother Nature was referring to was Noct's crystal, right? Anyway, I'm off to read about Chocobo riding :D
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/27/13 . chapter 16
Oh snap! That shall be their ticket into the Underworld! Not much to comment about on this chapter... Well, I'm glad we learned a little more about Noctis' past :) I really liked that part. Good work!
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/27/13 . chapter 15
I'm glad you liked writing this story as much as I like reading it or we'd have some issues XD I actually liked the ending :3 (Even though it was rather cliche) The Fortune Teller thing was a nice insert :) Cookies for you :D I'm ready to see what awaits our party in the Underworld!
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/27/13 . chapter 14
Nice! I feel bad for Noctis though... Anyone who has played a video game and failed multiple times and has been forced to start from the beginning no matter how close you may have been knows exactly how he felt XD I was actually like 'Pay Back' when Prompto hit Noctis multiple times in the nose LOL The Underworld? This is about to get really good! But just how are they going to get there? I must read on to find out :D
| o0ForeverFantasy0o 1/27/13 . chapter 13
The Light! This should be good! I feel bad for the girl's mother though... can't imagine the pain she feels :( We also found why Prompto was unhappy! That had been nagging at my mind for a bit. Very good idea with the whole going into people's minds thing! Noctis is such gentleman for not wanting to use that power :3 But I'm still confused on why Prompto's dream was different... Guess I missed that one. Oh! I wanted to also say how I like how Prompto is always the first to start the battles :D Love how you wrote everyone in this chapter. Well done :)