|Reviews for Never Broken|
| kai 8/7/12 . chapter 12
ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
| Elm Treigh 7/8/12 . chapter 12
Haha! Oh this story was amazing! It was true to the film. It had action, it had heart, it had passion, and it definitely had laughs! Everything that made the movie awesome was seen in this story. I LOVED it. (That includes your OCs...) Thank you! :)
I tried to review on the first chapter but it seemed that FF was having "technical difficulties" so I'm not sure if you got it or not. If you did, great! If you didn't well at least there's this one right? :)
I also thought your OCs were perfect. I liked them each. I think I liked it more the fact that they were twins. That was awesome! Jet sounds like a more patient Colt and River sounds exactly like a chick that was trained in martial arts but still has that femininity. Most people right female martial artists as either complete bad a** or complete tomboys. You on the other hand, wrote as the perfect balance of girl and martial artist. Like her namesake. :)
Last thing I'd like to comment on is about one of your Author's Note about the boys' ages. You wrote them in their teens (preteen for Tum Tum) because it isn't clear how old they are in the film. I agree witih you there. I love the film! And I have thought about writing a fic of my own, but like you, I want to keep them as canon to the film as possible, including age. So I did a bit of research. Of course, I couldn't find much, seeing as the film isn't as popular as it should be. (more like an underground cult favorite) So with that in mind I decided to try the actors' birthdates.
The actor that plays Rocky would've been 13 when the film was being filmed, though he looked more like 11 maybe 12. The actor playing Colt (my personal favorite ;D) would've been 12, which seemed accurate to me. And the actor that played Tum Tum would've been 8, which also seemed accurate. However, I assume your fic is based after the film so it obviously doesn't matter as much but I figured, if ya wanted to know... *shrugs* :)
I also agree with you that the first 3 Ninjas is the best but I can't deny that I like all three of them: 3 Ninjas: Knuckle Up and 3 Ninjas: Kick Back (though Kick Back and Knuckle Up were released backwards).
Anyway! LOL Enough of my ramblings! Just know that I LOVED this and am gonna check out your other fics for more enjoyment. :) (Congrats on your marriage, by the way.)
| ashley 4/15/11 . chapter 11
great chapter as always! im kinda sad its about to end... i really like this story.. part of me wants u to update faster, but the other part is saying take ur time so it doesn't end, lol jk. ) u def should keep writing. r u gonna put up another story? yes plz! neways, cant wait to see how it ends. ))
| annalizzzy 4/14/11 . chapter 11
it's really good you should keep writing. i love. love, love it!
| ashley 3/4/11 . chapter 10
okay now i feel bad for not reviewing sooner lol. ) good stuff as always. sooo going back on colt's date. it was sweet n then kinda hot... almost perfect lol. sucks that it ended like that. but u have ur reasons lol.
n the dads letting them help... sooo unexpected! )
neway cant wait to read more! ))
| hello 11/15/10 . chapter 1
hello I like your story.
| ashley 9/21/10 . chapter 6
u updated! so i had to read it before school lol. im so glad i did! what a crazy, awesome chapter! i loooveddd it. ) omg my heart was racing the entire time... i can just see it happening in my head. n yes they kissed! u jus made my day lol. )) update soon pleeaseee!
| Aroura528 9/9/10 . chapter 5
ppplllleeeeaaassseee update please you cant leave it at that
| ashley 8/31/10 . chapter 5
*gasp* oh no! jet!
this is getting sooooo good! ) you're a really talented writer. this story reminds me of what i loved about the 3ninjas when i was a kid (and still do).
please update soon! )
| D 8/25/10 . chapter 2
COOL. Your writing is very descriptive. You could really get into it. Story plot is interesting and you stayed true to the characters. Well done. Keep it up!
p.s. Jet and River are cool OC's!
| nellsss 8/24/10 . chapter 5
haha! :D i'll try to get an update in as soon as i can!
& thank you all SO so much for reading & reviewing. :) it really means a lot. 333
| ashley 8/24/10 . chapter 5
yayyy! glad to see u updated! and so fast! ) but why must you leave me hanging? lol. can't wait for the next chappie! )
| Woot 8/17/10 . chapter 4
loved the chapter, please update
| ashley 8/9/10 . chapter 4
i looooove it! update soon!
| OtakuPlatypus 8/4/10 . chapter 4
River and Colt are really cute! :) Can't wait for the next chappie!