An enjoyable story.

I really loved this little story. The characterizations were spot on and you have a wonderful and talented writing style.

I liked that you had Luke keep the piece of Vader's cloak, and I also liked Luke's preoccupation (if that is the right word) with Vader's cloak that was sprinkled through out the fic.

Anyway, again, wonderful job! I'm adding this to my favorite's list.

:)

Nice Story.

CCAP

Okay, George Lucas has GOT to make this canon.

I like this one a lot... IT's good.

Many smiles with some wonderful father-son moments thrown in for good measure.

"Aren't you a little old for blind hero worship?" Beautiful line.

"Be cautious of the vows you make. Be certain of their wisdom, be assured of the veracity of the ones who whisper secrets... or you may make a mistake so terrible that you will burdened with it forever."

Wise words that Anakin discovered a little too late.

I like Vader's cloak coming into play.

"And anyway, it was unlikely that they would ever meet again."

If only you knew...

VFA

ohh real nice.

good

loved the story, Luke was so vulnerable and the naive farmboy while Vader came across as a parent/caregiver.

i love love LOVE this story! its so cute and heartfelt. i wouldn't have ever thought of vader acting the way he did. thanks to you, i can't watch Star Wars without invisioning Vader with a mug that says I'M THIS CLOSE TO BEING THE GALAXY'S #1 DAD! hehe. _

Again, wonderful story

Yours til the core goes dark

Blakaize, Vader's other daughter

intersting. I liked Luke's last thoughts about WHY Vader helped him. Your story was a good read, but I have a hard time thinking that Luke wouldn't know what Vader looked like. Pretty good story. Cool idea.

I really like this story! It is well written and entertaining. Luke and Vader are both well written as well.

Wow... just wow. I'm favoriting this right away.

Beautiful prose. Very beautiful. Very masterful and professional presentation of emotions and whatnot. The Creatures terrified me, and the whole thing felt realistic.

I felt the true emotions of Luke and... 'Kin'. The almost friendship... or maybe it was a kind of parental friendship. I could really feel the shock as Luke learned the true identity to his rescuer.

Amazing. I really loved it. Good job. *Applauds.*

YAY! hot stuff! i loved this fic, it was so wonderful! my fav part was when vader was caring for him when he got ill, and when clutched the torn peice of the cloak, aw it was so wonderful! you did a great job and keep up the amazing work !

loyal fan and captian

yukiko

Oh, I really liked this! Beautifully written, and so nice to think that Anakin still cared about Luke, and was protecting him from the Emperor... Great story!