I think this is a good start to a story, I don't know why you didn't continue it. :(

this is really good, I hope you update soon, but not to soon so that you rush it

it is cute

nice start

I absolutley love this. I like your wriiting style it is mature and very easy to follow. The chapter was well though out and broken up. I can't wait for the chapters to come. Good luck with the story, and happy writting!