|Reviews for WALLY: The Humanized Novelization! edited|
| DaLintyMan 4/16/13 . chapter 1
So he is still mentally deficient...
| Kountry101 12/18/12 . chapter 33
Omgosh I love love love love this. My heart just turn into a gooey mess, because I adored this couple and this story so much. 3
| bh18 12/3/12 . chapter 33
Hey, I DO NOT care what you may say, Jeanette comes up in this story in place of Eve! You're personal copies might not have it, but check the stuff you already uploaded.
And fix the grammar here, it's all over the place. Not to mention It Only Takes a Moment and Lido Deck are copies of the same. Please take the time to fix that. In fact, bring this whole thing to some order, and put Garbage Airlock in the right place.
Other than that, loved it.
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 33
YEAH! WOO! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YOU ROCK MAN! YEAUH! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 28
| The Fluffy Ball 8/13/12 . chapter 33
I'm glad you made changes to the original story. There were typos in it that distracted me, and this flows better.
I'm following you in hopes that you continue with the epilogue.
| Guest 8/12/12 . chapter 33
I hate to ask, but is it me, or did there used to be a chapter 34?
| reina malvada 6/23/12 . chapter 34
Guess what? I'm in ff TODAY 23RD JUNE. I really do not know why some "authors" get angry with the new "rule"a bout MA rating. News for you girl! This is a guideline WAS updated on 2002 FF DID NOT ALLOWED any kind of graphical violence or explicit sex furthermore if you would read the guidelines you know that this king of spamming is forbiden by FF. This is not a free website c'om baby nothing is free. This site has its rules in order to prevent legal sue. Or would you sent a thounsend dollars to get free to ff owner when he was in the jail?
If you broke them the baned you because YOU ACCEPT BEFORE TO PUBLISH FF confide in you IF YOU DID NOT READ AN FF DELETED YOUR FICS IS BECAUSE YOU ARE SUCH A FOOLISH under you own risk published forbiden fics so what do you want to do FF? Send a congratulations post card?
READ THE GUIDELINES BEFORE PUBLISH AND MAYBE YOU UNDERSTAND WHY FF UNLEASH YOUR IMAGINATION NOT YOUR PERVERTION THOUGHTS
| WALL-E and EVE In Love 6/22/12 . chapter 34
I love the story you made!
| RandomNumbers523156 5/7/12 . chapter 33
Beautiful, beautiful, astonishingly, unsurmontably beautiful. Treating them as humans give a complete new dimension to them. I loved how deep the changes you did were excellent, I really enjoyed how you portrayed Wally's dedication and Eve's personality are brilliant!
Even Otto was a good villain, to tell the truth I was cheering for him to have a change of heart with the images of Earth, but it was in vain, in the end he was the only one responsible for his own demise and had a fitting end.
I also have to comment on Moe, his OCD is a problem, but this doesn't diminish his cuteness.
The last part made me glue my eyes to the screen, my heart skipped lots of beats with Wally's almost death, but I made such a huge smile to the fact he was alive. I actually was going to study econometrics but I got so immersed in the story that I couldn't stop reading, I hope I can make up, though. Again, I salute you for giving us such a magnificient piece of fanart!
| RandomNumbers523156 5/6/12 . chapter 3
Very, very interesting, you managed to capture very well WALL-E, or rather, Wally's personality, alone yet faithful to his work. The world building is also very good, it manages to capture the attention of the reader. I was going to comment when I finish, but I decided to do this now, because, did the original author got the peacemaker as a reference to Iron Man? It would be a really interesting idea.
| CC 4/20/12 . chapter 33
I love this story: going on my favorites right now. But you should really mark it as Complete on the net.
| CC 4/20/12 . chapter 31
| CC 4/20/12 . chapter 30
And Berney was still outside...
| CC 4/20/12 . chapter 29